THE CLASH
Both warriors looked at each other sweat on their brow. The time it took most people to move these 2 men could kill an army. They both locked their eyes on their target. The man on the right was going for his opponent's neck. The man on the left was aiming for his opponent's stomach. The battle would be decided in 1 stroke. It would be the death of a master swordsman either way. The one on the right was a master of the Kamiah Kashin style and the man on the left was a master at don ton own style. Their end would be a great climax. So Yahiko are you ready to die? Instantly Yahiko realized his strategy and stroke. Both the fighters ran past each other and turned 2 see each other. Ha you uuuuuh both fighters said at the same moment. (3 hours later.) Yahiko are you stupid you could have been hurt. Sorry Lily hiee I guess that you couldn't have told me he was good before. I did you only listened to Kauro and Kenshin and know, Shut up Lily, NO you need to hear this ever since Kauro and Kenshin got killed, Shut up Lily, No you've been fighting so much that I'm worried Yahiko! (Yahiko looks at Lily.) You don't get it do you some stupid street brawler got em that's what gets me I mean god kenshin has done so much and for what? What do you mean? Well its just Kenshin has fought so many enemies and beat them all and then. But you kill these men for no reason that's illegal I mean. Do you really think that so far I've killed 3 out of the 12 biggest illegal gun dealers in the city. Yahiko what is it with you and guns lately that's. That's what got him. What? The brawler pulled a gun and shot kenshin. What! (Anime look of shock) Ya. So that's why? No not just that but what if the same thing happened to a cop, a merchant, or even a child. (Lily looks like she's in shock.) Yeah I know it's overwhelming isn't it. Yeah I mean your deep Yahiko I thought you did it out of vengeance or grief but for the future. Plus I like to sword fight don't forget that.
First fan fic review to tell me what you think
TTRUNKS
Both warriors looked at each other sweat on their brow. The time it took most people to move these 2 men could kill an army. They both locked their eyes on their target. The man on the right was going for his opponent's neck. The man on the left was aiming for his opponent's stomach. The battle would be decided in 1 stroke. It would be the death of a master swordsman either way. The one on the right was a master of the Kamiah Kashin style and the man on the left was a master at don ton own style. Their end would be a great climax. So Yahiko are you ready to die? Instantly Yahiko realized his strategy and stroke. Both the fighters ran past each other and turned 2 see each other. Ha you uuuuuh both fighters said at the same moment. (3 hours later.) Yahiko are you stupid you could have been hurt. Sorry Lily hiee I guess that you couldn't have told me he was good before. I did you only listened to Kauro and Kenshin and know, Shut up Lily, NO you need to hear this ever since Kauro and Kenshin got killed, Shut up Lily, No you've been fighting so much that I'm worried Yahiko! (Yahiko looks at Lily.) You don't get it do you some stupid street brawler got em that's what gets me I mean god kenshin has done so much and for what? What do you mean? Well its just Kenshin has fought so many enemies and beat them all and then. But you kill these men for no reason that's illegal I mean. Do you really think that so far I've killed 3 out of the 12 biggest illegal gun dealers in the city. Yahiko what is it with you and guns lately that's. That's what got him. What? The brawler pulled a gun and shot kenshin. What! (Anime look of shock) Ya. So that's why? No not just that but what if the same thing happened to a cop, a merchant, or even a child. (Lily looks like she's in shock.) Yeah I know it's overwhelming isn't it. Yeah I mean your deep Yahiko I thought you did it out of vengeance or grief but for the future. Plus I like to sword fight don't forget that.
First fan fic review to tell me what you think
TTRUNKS