Finally out chapter 1
AN: my first fic had a review the guys said all my flaws and I wanted to see if I could change to a different story something that will please him and all my future viewers. Please point out all my flaws and I will try to fix it.
I do not own Naruto.
Naruto Uzumaki, genin of konoha, jinjuuriki of the kyuubi no yoko... and a mask.
Naruto Uzumaki has lived a painful life before becoming a ninja. He was attacked, poisoned, betrayed, burned, and so on.
He kept a mask of happiness that only a select few knows. And he is almost at his limit. Once he reaches his limit he will show his true self... his darker self.
Now we go to our main character now at konoha's Ninja Academy.
NINJA ACADEMY
Alright Naruto, please do the transformation, substitution, and clone jutsus. Asked Iruka Umino a chunin of konoha and Ninja Academy instructor. He was with another instructor Mizuki one of naruto's many haters for being the container of the kyuubi and a person who cannot tell the difference of the container from it's content.
Alright Iruka-sensei! Said naruto as he performed the transformation jutsu... well his version of it. He transformed into a female version of himself. With smoke covering his or her private parts and did a sexy pose.
Iruka was covering his nose, while Mizuki's eyes widen. Alright naruto you can turn back to normal now. Said Iruka as he was trying to look away.
Alright now do the substi... naruto watch out! Said Iruka since Mizuki wanted to get this over with and threw 3 kunai at Naruto who substituted with a chair just in time.
Alright... now the clone jutsu. said Iruka as he glared at Mizuki.
Naruto performed the clone jutsu and a poof of smoke came. Once the smoke cleared you can see a dead looking clone naruto who is pale... even his clothes.
Naruto... you fail again. Said Iruka who looked sad and sighed. While mizuki was smirking at this since he didn't like Naruto who knows about it. And plans to manipulate Naruto to steal the forbidden scroll for him, so he could gain power.
Naruto was heads down he was depressed... with his mask on he looked depressed.
Inside the mask he knew with his chakra reserves he couldn't do a normal clone which he talked the Sarutobi about this.
FLASHBACK
Sarutobi was doing the headache of all kages. Paperwork it was so dreadful that some kage hopefuls after finding out about paperwork committed suicide.
Damn.. .paperwork if I find the secret or if someone tells me the secret to defeat this paperwork then I would give him/her anything he wants. Murmured Sarutobi as he was doing paperwork only for Naruto to come in.
Hello Jiji. Said naruto in a dead serious voice.
Naruto? What's wrong why are so serious it can kill? Asked Sarutobi surprised to hear naruto that serious.
I have a problem... with my chakra reserves I can't do a normal clone so I have to find a different clone jutsu to use and if I don't find one then I will fail my exam. Said Naruto dead serious.
Hmmm... I could help you out but I have all this dreadful paperwork to do. Said Sarutobi.
I could help you out with tha...AH! said Naruto as he was grabbed and shake by Sarutobi who wanted to know the secret of defeating paperwork finally.
Tell me! I will do anything! Just tell me dammit! Said Sarutobi.
I he-ard a-bout a ju-tsu ca-lled sha-dow c-lone ju-tsu whi-ch is so-lid and ca-n gi-ve the mem-ories of the cl-one. Wh-y don-'t you try t-o u-se tha-t. Said naruto as he was shaked by Sarutobi who stopped. And hugged the boy so tight his eyes were about to pop out.
Thank you Naruto! You have no idea what have you just done for me! Said Sarutobi as he dropped naruto and gave him a scroll.
Naruto as a reward I want to give you your parents' scrolls that contain all their jutsus and weapons. And a seal on one of the scrolls has the keys to their house. It's just near the hyuuga compound but don't live there yet just go their time to time. And here is a scroll on the shadow clone jutsu it could help you out. Said Sarutobi as he handed naruto one mid-sized scroll that was a storage scroll that contained all the other scrolls.
Thank you Jiji, and good luck on that paperwork. Said naruto as he left with the scroll on his pocket.
Thank you... naruto. Said Sarutobi as he did the hand seals and had a shadow clone do the paperwork while he took out a orange book that had the title " icha icha paradise: holiday addition" and you could hear Sarutobi occasionally release a perverted giggle.
END OF FLASHBACK
Hey Iruka-sensei that was only a clone jutsu but can I try a different clone jutsu? asked naruto to Iruka who was thinking and looking at the rule book if it's allowed.
Well it doesn't say anything here so go for it. Said Iruka as he gave the signal for naruto to do a different clone jutsu.
SHADOW CLONE JUTSU! said naruto as the room was filled by shadow clones of naruto.
Naruto... you... pass! Said Iruka as he handed naruto his headband, who gladly took it.
Mizuki was not happy his plan was already being foiled by naruto now he has to do it himself instead of looking for a failed student.
Alright you may go out now naruto. Said Iruka as naruto went out of the room and out of the academy wearing his headband with pride.
Now I could finally remove this mask and open that scroll. Thought naruto as he went to the house of his parents. Which was actually a 4 story house, that had 6 guest rooms, one large living room, 5 bathrooms, a training room, the armory, the blacksmith's area, library, office, and the king room where his parents sleep, and the kitchen. And finally the outside training grounds, it was really really large. You could fit hill and still have space for several more. And since the mansion had a lot of valuable things in it of course there were booby traps which was set for looters who would try to get in occasionally. And several protective seals were set around the mansion including sound seals. And the only people to get in the house were guests, the 4th hokage, his wife and naruto their son.
As naruto to the house he checked if there was anyone around. There was none so he bit his thumb and wiped his blood on the gate. And it opened, naruto got in the house, immediately went to the library. Once he got to the library he saw I giant scroll with a note on it.
It read:
Naruto,
By the time you read this you should be at least genin, my name is minato namikaze 4th hokage and konoha's yellow flash. I am your father I am sorry for sealing the kyuubi no yoko in you but I had no choice and... I wanted you to tame it's power so you could protect konoha, your loved ones and friends with it's power. I also didn't want any parent suffer since their child is the container of the kyuubi no yoko. For once again I am truly sorry, now on to the the giant scroll this note is attached too. This scroll contains several interesting swords I found in a cave.
I never used any since I don't do swords so I thought you could use them. Since there are several I wish for you only to pick four since you are just a genin but once you become chuunin you can get 2 more and then 3 more for jonin and for above you could choose all.
Also inside this huge scroll are several kenjutsu styles I have found too. I hope these would help you out.
Your mom also wanted to say something.
Hello my boy... my name is kushina Uzumaki Namikaze I am your mother. As well as the second container of the kyuubi no yoko. I am sorry for helping your father seal the kyuubi in you but we had not choice I hoped your knucklehead of a father explained to you why with did it. But I wanted you to do the one thing I could not do with the kyuubi... tame/befriend it and master it's power.
now inside this scroll are also my katana it has a red blade the rest is like any old katana, it's called red queen which is how I got my name but mine was red death since my hair was thought to have become red thanks to the blood of my enemies.
The blade is capable of firing fire. And can be attached to your waist even do you don't have a sheath but I provided you one anyways. Now we uzumakis have a bloodline... the bloodline is chakra chains. We can do anything we want with the chains but in return we it sips a good amount of our chakra. But the advantage with it, it can also take away our enemies chakra and give it to us.
I love you very much and take care your father has something to say to you.
Alright naruto the seal that contains the kyuubi slowly takes it's knowledge, power and chakra from it and gives it to you but it takes time it will finish when you are about 13 I guess. I am not sure but once that happens good luck on mastering it I love you very much and take care... we will always be watching you.
Minato Namikaze & Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze
Naruto was crying remembering what the note said. as he opened the scroll he channelled his chakra to the seal on it and release the kenjutsu scrolls, his mother's blade the red queen, and the blades his father found.
Alright now to pick. Said naruto as he began to pick his blade he was only allowed to choose 4 so he has too choose wisely.
AFTER A LOT OF THINKING LATER
Alright I think these four will do best. Said naruto
The first sword looked like.(sword quest: fallen wing)
This blade should be called fallen wing. Said naruto as he looked at the blade since it had black and blue feathers on the hilt. The ability of the blade was to control wind, and give the user wings of his own.
the second sword looked like. (sword quest: tempest)
I'll call this tempest. Said naruto since, the blade had a strong ability for wind and lightning and was like a cyclone, has the ability to grant the user to be immune to lightning.
The third sword looked like. (sword quest: holy shadow)
Alright now for this one... how about holy shadow. Said naruto. The blade was able to protect the user via his own shadow even if he is in the dark. And has the ability to grant the user to blind the enemy via bright light.
The last blade looked like(sword quest: star demise)
Hmmm how about star demise for you my little friend. Said naruto since he saw around the hilt was spinning chunks of rock he never seen and looked like it was from space and it's like it had it's own gravity.
Alright now that's done... time to train. Said naruto as he did the hand seals and summoned his shadow clones.
Alright I want you guys to group yourselves into 50 each group then practice this style with wooden katana at the training room now go! Also 10 of you will grab one sword each then practice with it and find out any abilities of the sword. I have a little chat with the kyuubi. Said naruto as he sat on the floor and started to meditate.
MINDSCAPE
Hello kyuubi... said naruto as looked straight into the eyes of the kyuubi who is contained to a cell with huge metal bars and at the middle bar is a seal.
Ah... my warden has finally arrived. Said the kyuubi looking at naruto.
I have a deal for you kyuubi-san. Said naruto to the kyuubi who was now interested.
I am listening. Said the kyuubi wanting to know what is this "deal".
The deal is that you either parish when the seal takes all your life, knowledge, and chakra and give it to me. Or I'll let you free by having a shadow clone do a permanent transformation jutsu, and you can transfer your soul to my clone but with only 1/10 of your chakra. Said naruto since he knew that the chakra of the bijuu will just keep on growing till it reaches it's max. Which the kyuubi is already at.
Hmmm... what an interesting deal... fine but I'll also give my knowledge of all the jutsus I know since I don't even use them since I am so powerful, even without jutsus. Said the kyuubi.
No... I don't want the jutsus you know you keep it. Said naruto since he wanted to train for his power he just wanted the chakra of the kyuubi so he could use a lot more jutsus.
Fine then I accept... and I am ready. Said the kyuubi as he closed his eyes and possess one of the shadow clones, had it do a permanent transformation jutsu into a normal sized fox with nine tails then left.
OUTSIDE MINDSCAPE
...finally it's over. Said Naruto as he looked at his stomach and saw the seal was still there since he has too much chakra it turned into a containing seal that will give naruto all the chakra he needs.
*grumble * *grumble* could be heard from naruto.
Oh my looks like I am hungry... well better go to ichiraku for some ramen! Said Naruto.
Even do his mask is out... some stuff never changes.
Naruto uzumaki will now face the life of the shinobi.
AN: alright I hope this first chapter will do it for you guys and for the guy who reviewed my first story.
Alright now can which girl should naruto be paired with.
Konan
Hinata
Temari
Ino
Tenten
Tayuya
Kurenai
Yugao
Anko
Hana
OC
Harem
Please put your answers at the comments.
Good bye everyone!