What if chapter 1

'' were coming for you '' the doctor always kept his promises but Amy was starting to get annoyed. Melody was getting older she had lived her life inside a little room with the men she knew so much about but had never ever met.

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'' hold on '' shouted the doctor.

'' we have no choice '' shouted madam kestra.

(TARDIS SOUND ) '' have we landed '' asked commander strax.

''yeah just about '' replied the doctor.

They all followed the doctor out of the TARDIS '' move out when you find Amy call me '' said the doctor .

'' where are you going '' questioned Rory.

'' to have a word with who ever 's in charge '' replied the doctor as he ran off down one of the long corrie doors.

'' okay you two do that way and me and commander strax will go this way '' said Rory pointing in the direction of one of the corrie doors .

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The doctor had found a monitor and with a bit of help from the sonic got through to the lady in charge of this base .

'' what do you want with her '' shouted the doctor rage flowing through his voice.

'' let me think she's not ready yet only 17 what a shame '' spoke the purple lips of anger.

'' what do you want with her '' shouted the doctor not only was he frustrated but he was annoyed.

'' I want what hope holds left in this bitter war and I will get it one way or another '' spoke the lady.

'' war against who '' asked the doctor .

'' The war against you doctor '' she said.

'' I swear on fish-custard that you will are never going to get you hands on her '' shouted the doctor as he stormed out of the room.

'' oh I think I will '' she said her voice as cold as her heart. There she was looking towards a screen that was showing Melody and Amy .

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After all the walking the doctor got to the prison ward that had over hundreds of doors. '' grr '' he thought to himself '' Amy could be in anyone.''

''No please don't take her leave her alone '' screamed Amy.

'' ahh thanks pond ' screaming + crying = bad. '' the doctor ran towards the door that Amy was screaming from. '' hello pond's '' said the doctor as he perched himself on the door frame.

'' Now point a gun at me if it makes you feel any better '' as the doctor said him thousands of guns were raised towards him .

'' you late '' said a girl standing next to Amy.

'' Ahh you must be melody Amy's told me lots about you , well she hasn't but she will '' said the doctor

'' good things I hope '' said melody as a smug smile seeped across her face.

'' and im not late or am I '' replied the doctor.

'' yeah 17 years late. '' so Amy I last spoke to you 17 years ago .

'' yes but I knew you were coming I knew my boys would never let me down. ''

''come here pond '' said the doctor before hugging her.

Feww 1 chapter down 10 more to go that's not so bad if you've got any ideas send me messages and please R&R. please R&R e to me their like hugs from a friend . And tell me if you like my melody. - I have seen lots with baby melody and normal river so I wanted to do a teenage melody.