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Nekozawa's Secret

I walked to the Black Magic Club, happy as a demon who's consumed a world of souls. Today was the initiation of a new member! I entered the clubroom with a swish of the cloak guided the initiation member to the center of the contract circle. "Ryuuga Kamichii, do you wish to join the Club of Black Magic." It was more of a statement than a question. This kid wasn't exactly Black Magic material, but if the club didn't get more members soon, it would be shut down...I wouldn't let that happen. "Yes s-sir." he said, startling me out of my stupor, not that it mattered. "Then you must summon your familiar. Speak the words, and make the contract." I commanded. He said the summoning words and the circle around him glowed bright pink. I stood in the darkest corner, avoiding the light. Of course, this boy was such a weakling the light was such a female like color. He sliced his finger open and a few drops of blood were added to the blood stain for summoning on the floor. A black mist crowded the room and a female looking demon in sluttish black leather arose from it. "Who has summoned me?" she demanded. The weak boy stepped forward and proclaimed, "I did. I wish to make a contract with you demon." The demon looked at him with slight disgust. "Are you sure? You look too weak to handle a familiar.", it grinned threateningly, revealing her sharp teeth. I stepped forward, preparing to save the boy from having his soul devoured, if need be, as that tended to happen. He snapped at her, "Yes I am sure! Now cut the crap and make a contract with me!", shouted he, surprising all of us. The demon frowned and sighed, "Alright fine..." and it snapped it's fingers, and he glowed pink. "Your soul belongs to you until the day you die, and on that day, I will collect and devour it, understand?" it snapped. Ryuuga nodded with an intense determination. She transformed into a bunny and hopped into his arms. I walked forward and placed the black magic pin in his uniform. "There you are! Now you are an official member of the Black Magic club." He beamed up at me and bowed, "Thank you senpai!" The bunny in his arms rolled it's eyes and muttered something that sounded like, "Stupid humans..." Well that was one more to the club, hopefully that would increase the sales pitch...We desperately needed that money, otherwise we would be shut down, but I digress... The chime for the end of school rang and I walked out of the building, past the lavish gardens, keeping to the shadows- as not to scare the other students- under the cherry trees. I stopped to pick a flower that had fallen on my head off and held it in my hand. Flowers were so fragile, just like human life. I tossed it over my shoulder and continued walking. I bumped into Suo, the last person I wanted to see. "Suo..." I growled growled grouchily. He gave a small shriek and shined a flashlight in my face. I let out a loud shoutand ran to the limo waiting for me, diving into the back seat. Today was a horrible, but good day, and I prayed to the gods of darkness that tomorrow would be better.