~NOTE~ This story of mine was originally on the Harry Potter Author section
but Fan Fiction like cut that section out or something so I had to move it
over to plain Harry Potter. Sorry for the inconvenience
Hey everyone out there Mongoose here and I'm going to try my hand at a serious story. If you happen to have read my last one, "Oh No Hidden Secrets and Desires" then you would probably find it hard to believe I could write anything remotely serious. Well I'm going to try to change that. I think this has been done before but hey who gives a flying monkey. So without further ado, I present the Disclaimer and then the actual story.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything to do with Harry Potter. If I did do you think I'd be writing this on the Internet?
Family Matters
Chapter One- The Trip
"School really sucks you know." Mackenzie said casting a sideways glance at her best friend Lauren as they walked out of the door into the crisp autumn afternoon of October the twentieth. "Yeah I know. But hey, at least we can look forward to the trip tomorrow." Lauren said looking at her friend as they both walked out of their High School. You probably wouldn't be able to picture two people that looked as different as they did. Lauren being a natural blonde with greenish eyes and a pale complection. She was just about an inch shorter than Mackenzie who had coppery red hair and blue gray eyes. They had been best friends for most of their lives and High School hadn't torn them apart like it did to some people. They shared views on many things and they talked to each other about mostly everything. Mackenzie being older than Lauren even by several month's (she had just had her 15th birthday on the 16th) was none the wiser though. "Yeah I can't believe we get to go to England!" Mackenzie said cheering up slightly. "And we get to be gone a month!" Lauren said happily. "The only problem is the homework. I can't believe we have ten freaking pages due for English the day after we get back!" Mackenzie said angrily as her already red cheeks got even redder. "Well cheer up old buddy and get home and pack." Lauren said walking over to where her mom's car was parked while Mackenzie was doing the same. "I'll see you bright and early tomorrow." Mackenzie called out to her retreating friend as she opened the passenger's side door to her mom's car.
Well I'm all packed I might as well get to bed. Mackenzie thought as she started to pull down the sheets on her bed. She fell asleep almost instantly but she was troubled by more of her weird dreams. A couple that looked a little younger than her mom. They had a little baby boy. The man had the most unruly black hair but the woman had startlingly green eyes. Then the picture seemed to fade but it was almost like Mackenzie was standing there in the room watching all this happen. She was watching the couple coo over their baby when she heard a noise outside. They obviously did too because the couple looked up in unison towards the door. Mackenzie noticed that things weren't as clear anymore. There weren't really definite lines, like when she didn't have her glasses on. But she could still hear perfectly well. "Lilly take Harry and go, NOW!" "No, James I'm not leaving." Mackenzie heard a click and saw the door swing open to the house and what appeared to be a dark shroud stepped in. "GO LILLY, I'll hold him off run!" Mackenzie then heard a high-pitched laughter that made her feel as if there was no good left in the world. She saw a blinding green light and heard the woman's voice once again, "NO JAMES! NOOOO! Please no Harry I'll do anything just don't harm my child." The voice had changed in pitch from a cry of despair to a whimper of desperation. "Stand aside you silly girl, MOVE ASIDE!" again Mackenzie heard that same cruel, cold voice that made her shiver on the inside. She tried desperately to wake up but it was as if someone wanted her to see these horrific images. Then the high-pitched laughter again invaded her dream- now obviously a nightmare- another blinding green flash and she heard a soft thud like something relatively heavy hitting the floor. "Now for you boy." Another flash of green and. Mackenzie awoke with a start to find herself still in her room but shaking all over and feeling like she had just jumped into the lake in the middle of February. It took her a moment to take everything that she had seen in her dream. She didn't know if this was just a horrible mixture of late night TV and sugar or something else.. no it wasn't something else. She glanced at her clock: 3:00 in the morning. She might as well try to get a few more hours sleep and see what Lauren had to say about this weird dream. But still nothing could ruin her day, she was going to England with her best friend and everything was going to be ok... wasn't it?
Well Ladies and Gents theres the first chapter of my hopefully pretty decent story. Did you like or no? Well tell me in a review. Flames don't bother me, they keep me quite toasty. : ) So review if you please and don't make me beg. Pretty pretty please?
Yours truly, Mongoose
Hey everyone out there Mongoose here and I'm going to try my hand at a serious story. If you happen to have read my last one, "Oh No Hidden Secrets and Desires" then you would probably find it hard to believe I could write anything remotely serious. Well I'm going to try to change that. I think this has been done before but hey who gives a flying monkey. So without further ado, I present the Disclaimer and then the actual story.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything to do with Harry Potter. If I did do you think I'd be writing this on the Internet?
Family Matters
Chapter One- The Trip
"School really sucks you know." Mackenzie said casting a sideways glance at her best friend Lauren as they walked out of the door into the crisp autumn afternoon of October the twentieth. "Yeah I know. But hey, at least we can look forward to the trip tomorrow." Lauren said looking at her friend as they both walked out of their High School. You probably wouldn't be able to picture two people that looked as different as they did. Lauren being a natural blonde with greenish eyes and a pale complection. She was just about an inch shorter than Mackenzie who had coppery red hair and blue gray eyes. They had been best friends for most of their lives and High School hadn't torn them apart like it did to some people. They shared views on many things and they talked to each other about mostly everything. Mackenzie being older than Lauren even by several month's (she had just had her 15th birthday on the 16th) was none the wiser though. "Yeah I can't believe we get to go to England!" Mackenzie said cheering up slightly. "And we get to be gone a month!" Lauren said happily. "The only problem is the homework. I can't believe we have ten freaking pages due for English the day after we get back!" Mackenzie said angrily as her already red cheeks got even redder. "Well cheer up old buddy and get home and pack." Lauren said walking over to where her mom's car was parked while Mackenzie was doing the same. "I'll see you bright and early tomorrow." Mackenzie called out to her retreating friend as she opened the passenger's side door to her mom's car.
Well I'm all packed I might as well get to bed. Mackenzie thought as she started to pull down the sheets on her bed. She fell asleep almost instantly but she was troubled by more of her weird dreams. A couple that looked a little younger than her mom. They had a little baby boy. The man had the most unruly black hair but the woman had startlingly green eyes. Then the picture seemed to fade but it was almost like Mackenzie was standing there in the room watching all this happen. She was watching the couple coo over their baby when she heard a noise outside. They obviously did too because the couple looked up in unison towards the door. Mackenzie noticed that things weren't as clear anymore. There weren't really definite lines, like when she didn't have her glasses on. But she could still hear perfectly well. "Lilly take Harry and go, NOW!" "No, James I'm not leaving." Mackenzie heard a click and saw the door swing open to the house and what appeared to be a dark shroud stepped in. "GO LILLY, I'll hold him off run!" Mackenzie then heard a high-pitched laughter that made her feel as if there was no good left in the world. She saw a blinding green light and heard the woman's voice once again, "NO JAMES! NOOOO! Please no Harry I'll do anything just don't harm my child." The voice had changed in pitch from a cry of despair to a whimper of desperation. "Stand aside you silly girl, MOVE ASIDE!" again Mackenzie heard that same cruel, cold voice that made her shiver on the inside. She tried desperately to wake up but it was as if someone wanted her to see these horrific images. Then the high-pitched laughter again invaded her dream- now obviously a nightmare- another blinding green flash and she heard a soft thud like something relatively heavy hitting the floor. "Now for you boy." Another flash of green and. Mackenzie awoke with a start to find herself still in her room but shaking all over and feeling like she had just jumped into the lake in the middle of February. It took her a moment to take everything that she had seen in her dream. She didn't know if this was just a horrible mixture of late night TV and sugar or something else.. no it wasn't something else. She glanced at her clock: 3:00 in the morning. She might as well try to get a few more hours sleep and see what Lauren had to say about this weird dream. But still nothing could ruin her day, she was going to England with her best friend and everything was going to be ok... wasn't it?
Well Ladies and Gents theres the first chapter of my hopefully pretty decent story. Did you like or no? Well tell me in a review. Flames don't bother me, they keep me quite toasty. : ) So review if you please and don't make me beg. Pretty pretty please?
Yours truly, Mongoose