Okay so this is my first fanfic and I've been playing with this story for a while now and so decided to post it

Hope you enjoy


"Standing on the rooftops! Everybody scream your heart out!"

I sung at the top of my voice not a care in the world. "Standing on the rooftops..Waiting till the bombs drop!"

Heaven.

Or close too it i'd imagine, I surveyed my new appartment happily, aside from the frayed wallpaper and the damp on the floor this place wasn't half bad.

I turned down the volume on my stereo and grabbed one of the boxes that were piled in what was soon to be the living area.

Opening it up I smiled widely, I picked out a timer that was still ticking away, stuck to it was a note.

Rachel

You might want to open the door when the timer goes off

it's pretty cold out here in the hall way

love the one and only of course

haha

x x x

"Of course," I muttered rolling my eyes at the cheesieness, just then the timer buzzed, I at it curiously then at the door, I slowly got up and reached out and opened it crying out as Dougie caught me up in his arms.

"How did you do that?" I asked as he put me down kissing me quickly, "its a secret," he winked tapping his nose.

I smiled pulling him in, he looked round as I skipped over to the kitchen, "hmmm not bad," he grinned picking up the timer that was disgaurded on the floor and set it on the counter.

"But..." he added his voice trailed off, I turned round mock glaring at him,

if he dares point out the fraying wallpaper!

"But..." I sighed stepping over to him, he flashed me a quick grin before taking my hand, "as much as I love that you're doing this whole independant thing...it kind of got in the way of my plans." He murmured his eyes connecting with mine, I frowned confused.

"What plans?" I asked gripping his hands tighter when some kind of fear seemed to flash through his eyes.

He gulped nervously running his hands through his hair, then without a word he stood up off the stool and bent down on one knee.

I gasped as he looked up at me his infamous cheeky grin placed back on his face, I smiled shakily as my body tingled with nerves.

"Well I was kind of wondering if you would marry me?" I let out a small laugh of delight, my smile spreading from ear to ear as he placed the most beautiful ring on my finger.

"YES Oh my god yes!" I cried throwing my arms around his neck with such force that we both fell to the floor laughing, he kissed me passionately leaning on top of me.

"I love you," he whispered in between kisses, I pulled back looking deeply into his eyes "i love you too."


"Rachel Poynter...I love it," I grinned dreamily as we set down the sofa in the right position then topled onto it exhausted.

"hmmm I'm hungry," I laughed as my stomach let out a rumble of agreement, Dougie chuckled standing up and stretching, grabbing the keys from the side he came back over kissing me lightly, "I'll just run to the store be back in 5," he smiled I nodded stretching out. Then a minute after he left I had an idea, running onto the balcony I looked down at the street below I spotted Dougie walking along the sidewalk.

"I LOVE YOU DOUGIE!" I screamed the giggled as he looked round wildly, finally looking up and blowing me a kiss.

I smiled then slinked back into the living room collasping onto the sofa admiring the ring on my finger, closing my eyes I snuggled down breathing in deeply.

definatly heaven.


"Oh My God someone call an abulance!"

"QUICK!"

My eyes fluttered open upon hearing a lady scream, I blinked from the sunlight lifting my head off the cushion I looked around trying to figure out where the source of the noise was coming from.

"The car just hit him!"

I frowned locating the comotion to outside I stepped sleepily onto the balcony and looked down.

Immediately my blood ran cold, I gasped seeing a young man lying in the road next to a car that was crashed into the wall, the poor man was surrounded by mills of people, scattered around him were beautiful red poppies, I blinked peering down, then snapped back in shock.

It couldn't be

he was just here

5 minutes ago

here with me.

NO!

"NO!" I screamed running back into the apartment and scrambling outside, running down the hall way I slipped catching myself just in time. "No," I sobbed again clutching at my heart slamming my fist into the down button on the elevator.

Finally after what seemed like an age and me cursing the doors slid open, I jumped inside crying out as I saw Danny and Harry.

I breathed deeply tears pouring down my face slinging my arms around Danny's shoulders.

"tell me its not true!" I whispered in his ear clutching at his jacket. He pulled away slightly frowning, "is what not true?" He asked at the same time as Harry.

"D-Dougie...he hasn't been hit...by a car?" the two exchanged alarmed looks by my question, Danny's eyes instantly shining with emotion.

"We saw...but I didn't think it was him," Danny gulped his arm squeezing mine tightly, I was shaking badly my energy draining rapidly.

"oh my god," Harry breathed slamming his hand onto the ground floor button.

As the doors opened I jumped out in front of the others and crashed outside where I edged my way into the crowd finally coming to the front I dropped to my knees.

"Dougie," I wailed cradling his head in my lap.

Danny was instantly beside me taking hold of his hand whilst shouting for Harry to call an abulance.

We looked down at Dougie's unconcious form then into eachothers eyes, Danny's shining with tears fear leaking from him.

"He asked me to marry him," I whispered sobbing into Dougies chest.

Soon after hands pulled me back and Harry Danny and I watched as they carted his limp body into the abulance and drove him away.


"How is he?!" I demanded, Danny had been the first in to see Dougie as once we heard he was awake I didn't want him to see me in such a state.

But the look on Danny's face scared me more than i thought possible.

"Rachel..." he started his voice cracking, "he doesn't..."

I cried out in frustration hitting out at Danny's arm, "just tell me!" I yelled into his face.

He flinched then took a deep breath meeting my eyes gravely.

"He doesn't remember you."

Everything seemed to stop.

I stared unbelievingly at Danny whose face was marked with tears.

"W-what?" I whispered hoaresly then without waiting for a reply I pushed past him and ran into Dougies room.

Once I saw him sitting up with a bandage round his head I cried out with happiness throwing my arms around his neck.

"Thank god." I grinned kissing him, but suddenly he chucked me off him glaring.

"Who the Fck are you?" he asked his eyes screaming anger at me.

"D-Dougie its me...Rachel," I replied weakly grabbing hold of the chair for support.

"Dan theres some crazed fan in here HELP!" Dougie screamed, I cried out tears streaming from my eyes.

"Dougie its me Rachel your fiance!" I yelled holding up my ring finger where the ring he had only placed on my fingers hours ago glinted in the light.

Danny and Harry entered the room looking agitated.

"Dude get this freak out of here," Dougie said coldly turning away from me.

I covered my mouth trying to stifle the sobs, Danny placed his hand gently on my shoulder but i shrugged it off storming out of the room.

As soon as I was a safe distance away I leaned against the wall sliding down and burying my head into my arms I cried till my head was pounding painfully.

"He doesn't remember me," I whispered as Danny crouched down in front of me, he took my hands away from my face and wiped my tears.

"He will..give him time we'll make sure he does."

Danny promised pulling me into a hug.

I looked down at the ring that was now pressed deeply into my palm and sighed painfully.

"I hope so."


So theres the first chapter of my first Ever fanfic

Please review I'd love to hear what you guys thought

xox