Hello anybody who is reading this. This is my first fan fiction story and I would appreciate no insults although constructive criticism is welcomed.
Allegiances:
Windclan:
Leader:Crowstar: Black tom with yellow eyes.
Deputy: Quietfoot: Pale brown she-cat with amber eyes.
Medicine cat: Redwhisker: Red-ish tom with green eyes and white paws.
Apprentice: Clawmoon: Blue-grey she-cat with dark blue eyes.
Warriors:
Mintmuzzle: Pale grey she-cat with green eyes.
Dandelionear: White she-cats with yellow spots and green eyes.
Wolfsong: Dark grey she-cat with amber eyes.
Springleap: White she-cat with odd eyes (one green and one blue).
Hareflight: Very pale brown tom with green eyes.
Dustwhisker: Dark brown tabby tom with yellow eyes.
Foxtail: Orange tom with black feet and tail-tip.
Stoneclaw: Black tom with grey eyes and long claws.
Snowstorm: White she-cat with grey ear-tips, paws, and tail-tip with blue eyes.
Raindrop: Dark grey tabby she-cat with green eyes.
Darklight: Black she-cat with one white paw and amber eyes.
Sandeye: Orange tom with black stripes and amber eyes.
Markfoot: Grey tom with scar on left paw.
Apprentices:
Flickeringpaw: White she-cat with one orange paw, and an orange tail-tip with blue eyes.
Sunpaw: Dappled brown she-cat with yellow eyes.
Cloudpaw: White she-cat with brown paws.
Mosspaw: Orange tabby tom with green eyes.
Pinepaw: Dark brown tom with black spots and amber eyes.
Greypaw: White tom with with black spots and grey eyes.
Queens:
Quailflight: Tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.
Kits:
Leafkit: Calico she-kit with green eyes.
Eaglekit: Light brown tom with yellow eyes.
Creamfoot: Cream tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
Kits:
Stormkit: Dark grey tom with white paws, stomach, and chest.
Swampkit: Dark brown she-kit with one green eye and one blue eye
Larkkit: Black and white she-kit with green eyes.
Sleetkit: Pale grey she-kit with blue eyes.
Elders:
Snaketooth: Brown tom with black stripes and a missing fang.
Oakfoot: Black tom with brown paws and amber eyes.
Yellowleaf: Yellow tabby she-cat with green eyes.
Riverclan:
Leader: Ripplestar: Blue-grey she-cat with amber eyes.
Deputy: Muddybrook: White she-cat with brown paws and tail tip and blue eyes.
Medicine cat: Dewdrop: Cream tabby she-cat.
Apprentice: Juniperpaw: Pale grey she-cat with dark blue eyes.
Warriors:
Reedflight: Orange tabby tom with amber eyes.
Algaepond: Blue-grey she-cat with green eyes.
Frostbite: White she-cat with blue eyes.
Quickstep: Brown tabby she-cat with green eyes and white chest and paws.
Whitelily: White she-cat with yellow eyes.
Lightstreak: Black she-cat with white streaks and yellow eyes.
Shadedstone: Dark grey she-cat with pale grey eyes.
Breezecall: Brown she-cat with amber eyes and white chest.
Scratchclaw: Black tom with no claws (former kittypet).
Badgerpelt: Black and white tom with blue eyes that are almost black.
Foxfoot: Black tom with one orange foot.
Sunstrike: Yellow tom with amber eyes.
Croweye: Black tom with yellow eyes.
Smokefoot: Dark grey tom with yellow eyes.
Apprentices:
Wishpaw: White she-cat with golden eyes.
Featherpaw: Calico she-cat with amber eyes.
Pikepaw: Black and grey tom with golden eyes.
Beepaw: White she-cat with yellow spots and blue eyes.
Redpaw: Red-brown tom with green eyes.
Queens:
Duststream: Tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes.
Kits:
Minnowkit: Silver she-kit with green eyes.
Bluekit: Blue-grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Oakkit: Dark brown tabby tom with yellow eyes.
Elders:
Adderscale: Orange tom with green eyes.
Smokestorm: Grey tom with amber eyes.
Frogleap: Pale grey she-cat with green eyes.
Shadowclan:
Leader: Nettlestar: Dark grey she-cat with green eyes.
Deputy: Shadeclaw: Red tom with dark green eyes.
Medicine cat: Fernberry: White she-cat with green eyes.
Warriors:
Coyotefoot: Grey and brown she-cat with amber eyes.
Owlspeck: Brown she-cat with golden specks and grey eyes.
Rowancloud: White she-cat with dark amber eyes.
Lostfoot: Pale grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Mask: Pure black she-cat with golden eyes.
Ember: Pure black she-cat with with slightly darker golden eyes than Mask.
Ambershade: Calico she-cat with amber eyes.
Sedgeclaw: Brown tom with green eyes.
Birchstripe: Yellow tom with grey eyes.
Marshstep: Grey she-cat with brown paws and tail-tip with green eyes.
Sparrowwing: Brown she-cat with with pale brown paws and blue eyes.
Snaketail: Grey tom with black stripes and amber eyes.
Blackpatch: White tom with black patches and blue eyes.
Barleyfur: White tom with black patches and amber eyes.
Apprentices:
Flammingpaw: Orange tabby tom with amber eyes.
Cedarpaw: Brown tom with blue eyes.
Queens:
Mallowshade: Tortoiseshell she-cat
Kits:
Lilykit: White and grey she-kit with green eyes.
Pondkit: Brown and grey she-kit with blue eyes.
Mistfall: Blue-grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Kits:
Blackkit: Black she-kit with green eyes.
Orangekit: Orange tom with blue eyes.
Sharpkit: Orange tabby tom with green eyes.
Elders:
Nightspark: Mostly black calico she-cat with amber eyes.
Patchpelt: Brown tom with black patches and green eyes.
Milkfur: Pale cream coloured tom with blue eyes.
Thunderclan:
Leader: Cloudstar: White she-cat with blue eyes.
Deputy: Ashfire: Grey and orange tail
Medicine cat: Yarrowleaf: Yellow tom with green eyes.
Apprentice: Dustpaw: Dusty brown tom with dark brown paws and amber eyes.
Warriors:
Branchfall: White she-cat with amber eyes.
Brindlestorm: Brown tabby she-cat with grey eyes.
Fallowfoot: Brown she-cat with russet paws and amber eyes.
Silvergaze: Silver she-cat with grey eyes.
Nightrise: Black she-cat with blue eyes.
Waspfur: Black and yellow tom with amber eyes.
Alderclaw: Dark brown tom with amber eyes.
Snowfall: White she-cat with blue eyes.
Birdcall: Dappled brown she-cat with blue eyes.
Sandrock: Yellow tom with grey eyes.
Spiderfoot: Black cat with six toes on each paw and yellow eyes.
Stormflight: Grey Tom with white stomach and blue eyes.
Tigereye: Tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes.
Blacknose: White tom with a black nose and paw pads and yellow eyes.
Apprentices:
Mallowpaw: Pale grey she-cat with green eyes.
Hollowpaw: Dark brown she-cat with blue eyes.
Hailpaw: White she-kit with grey-blue eyes.
Eaglepaw: Brown tom with yellow yellow eyes.
Cloudypaw: Black tom with one yellow eye and white eye.
Mintpaw: Pale grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Queens:
Morningfur: Pale brown she-cat with white paws, muzzle, and tail-tip with blue eyes.
Kits:
Scarletkit: White she-kit with green eyes.
Mistlekit: Silver she-kit with blue eyes.
Lionkit: Golden tom with amber eyes.
Parsleykit: Yellow tom with green eyes.
Blizzardkit: Calico she-kit with blue eyes (adopted).
Elders:
Tansyleaf: Yellow tabby she-cat with green eyes.
Wolftooth: White tom with amber eyes.
Firetail: Grey tom with an orange tail-tip and amber eyes.
Cats outside the clan:
Tale: Pure white she-cat with red eyes.
Prologue:
There are certain things that not even the stars see coming, the slightest of breezes can change the future, as can the decision of a loner living on the other side of the planet. Therefore they did not foresee this prophecy, and when they did receive it they turned attentive gazes towards the world of Earth.
A world of mysteries
A time not foreseen
The time of the seer
The time of the receiver
The time of the giver
The time of change
A time of solving.
Please review (and tell me if the allegiances have a problem). The main characters are Flickeringpaw, Mask, Ember, and Tale.