Hey this is just and updated version of my fist story I hope you enjoy it.
"Hey ,Maka, I'm home" Soul yelled with an excited, but cool, tone.
He had had always felt a strong connection to Maka but now he finally realized why, he was in love with her. He walked down the hall with his hands shoved in his jacket pocket to Maka's room. As he peered at the small silver sign with her name on it. He had gotten it for her last Christmas, and he could still see his reflection in it . As his hart started to race, the door suddenly swung open. Maka ran into Soul's warm, soft, black, T-shirt that lay loosely against his strong chest.
"H-h-hi Soul, w-when did you get home?" Maka asked wide eyed as her face lit bright red.
"Just a minute ago . . . are you okay, you look kind of pale?" he said as he reached for her forehead.
Maka felt her face grow hot as she felt his fingertips graze her forehead. She didn't want him to know she was sick, so she turned around, his hand gently touching her silky hair. She slowly turned back around, her emerald eys meeting his ruby ones. She felt her heart hammering in her chest, and her cheeks coming closer to resembling a tomato. He lays his hand on her shoulder, the other on her forehead.
"Maka you're red and your face is hot, I-I mean warm. You're sick,go lay down. I'll be there in a minute, alright" He said, concerned. Cool guys were concerned for their partners.
"Okay, Soul ", Maka said as she turned and slowly sat down on her bed.
He stared at her wide eyed. She was really sick, she never agreed with him let alone did anything he asked. As he slouched back into her room he could see a head of golden sand colored hair pop out from the top of the blanket. Soul sat down next to her he looked at her and saw that she was asleep.
"Maka, if only you knew how much I loved you" Soul whispered with what sounded like a little hurt in his voice.
Maka shifted and turned her head to look at Soul. Panic through him. He thought she had heard him and he didn't want to tell her his true feelings like that it just wasn't cool.
"Mmm, what did you say Soul, I was half asleep" Maka said, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes.
"Umm, nothing important. J-just thinking out loud" he said, sighing with relief as Maka drifted into a deep sleep.
The next morning Soul opened his eyes to see Maka laying there next to him. As all of his memories of yesterday's events flooded back to him. He let out an upset sigh. He looked at his mister then to the picture of the two of them on her desk. He wondered if Maka cared about in the same way he cared for her but he knew she didn't.
"Soul I-I-I lo… yo.."
"Did Maka just say my name?" Soul thought. He had gotten lost in his thoughts of what she could have said when all of a sudden Maka tapped on his shoulder.
"Umm, Soul, I have to tell you something important." Maka sounded more innocent then ever. A note of worry in her voice made Soul nibble on his bottom lip nervously as her emerald eyes stared into his scarlet ones.
"I have to tell you something too" Both of them turned a deep crimson color as Maka moved closer to him.
"Umm I-I love you Soul" She said in a whisper before letting out a sigh of relief
Soul then turned and yanked Maka into a tight embrace the vanilla smell of her hair intoxicated him with every breath.
"I love you too Maka" Soul pulled away from Maka just an of to see her soft, innocent, beautiful face. Then he leaned in just close enough to graze Maka's lower lip a gasp escaped her lips and then Soul pulled her into a full long passionate kiss.
Thanks to iNsAnITYyYy for helping me fix it up ^_^
