Fullmetal Girl
Chapter 1: The beginning
Authors note: Hi! This is my first Fullmetal Alchemist fanfiction, so no flames please. Italic format is the oc thinking. The oc's name isn't mentioned in this chapter but if you want to know its Natalie. Thnx!
Disclaimer: I don't own Fullmetal Alchemist, it belongs to Arakawa Hiromu and it would suck if I did. The rest of the characters and ideas are mine.
I was writing chapter 3, when I realized I missed an important detail in this chapter so, this is the edited version.
I had a normal life leading up to now. I was an almost straight A student, I had lots of caring friends and family. 11 good years of life, but it all changed when I was getting ready to go to bed one night.
I was about to brush my teeth and change, when I saw the bathroom mirror in front of me starting to swirl. I, being a really curious person, reached in front of me and touched the mirror. Once touching the mirror, I couldn't let go.
No matter how I tried, I just couldn't let go. I was just about to call for help when I started to sink into the mirror. Surprisingly enough, sinking into a mirror was quite comfortable. Imagine falling onto the softest bed you've been on and sinking slowly into it.
But as more and more of me sunk into the mirror, I started to worry. What's inside of a mirror like? What would happen to me? Slowly, I started losing consciousness and the next thing I knew, I was unconscious.
I woke up lying on a road, but not a concrete road but a dirt one. As I stood up, I realized it was drizzling. The sky was gray and the grass yellow. It was a not raining very hard, but it smelt like there was going to be a thunderstorm later on during the day.
"Is this what inside of a mirror is like?" I thought to myself.
I turned around to see my surroundings. The dirt roads lead two directions. One on my left side and one on my right. On the left hand side, there was a forest in the distance. On the right, there was a hill and what appeared to be a house a kilo or two away. So… naturally I started down the right side.
As I was walking, I noticed that everything looked weird, like it was drawn, but I merely pushed the thought from my mind and decided it was my imagination. Soon, it started raining harder and harder and in no time I was completely drenched. After walking for a really long time, I was the house on the hill a few hundred feet away from me.
I noticed that there were some really weird and bright lights coming from one of the side windows. I went up to the door to knock to see if there was anyone home. After knocking many times and waiting for quite some time without anyone answering the door, I decided to leave.
I started walking down the path again but suddenly I felt really weak and something was bugging me. I looked back at the house and saw what it was. The strange lights were still flashing and I wanted to know what they were.
I decided to go back to the house and knock one last time. Still, nobody answered. At that point, I was hungry, tired and soaking and I didn't care about anything except for what the lights were, so I opened the *GASP* unlocked door.
"Wow… what a nice security system." I muttered to myself.
The house itself was quite nice, but it was really dirty as if nobody lived there for quite a while. Or no one cleaned the house at all.
It was really dark except for the mysterious flashing lights but I could tell that there was a set of stairs in front of me, a room to the left and a room to the left where the lights came from.
I walked inside the room on the right and a saw two boys, no older than me yelling at each other. The short kid with the blond hair yelled "AL!"and reached for who I guessed was Al. Suddenly I felt an intense pain on my shoulder and blacked out.
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