Hello..my first chapter of my Knight Rider Fanfic, its rather short but the other chapters i have will get longer (eventually) they are already types up but spamming is bad here. I hope to hear good feedback
Life and Death
Moonlight shone through the windows of an abandoned garage and a figure stood in the center of the area, a glowing red light quickly whooshed back and forth on the figure. Another shadow was on the other end of the space against a wall, every few moments it would shift positions or make a quiet squeak of pain. "are you alright over there?" a male voice asks. "I'm fine." the shadow against the wall replied before making another squeak of pain, she tries sounding more cheerful than she really feels as she says "you've been asking the same question every five minutes." "sorry." the male voice replies. The female by the wall takes a deep breath and finally lays down, her glowing ice blue eyes glanced toward the figure at the center then looked away toward the shelf in front of her. A few minutes pass when she lets out a loud shriek, the figure at the center jumps in surprise, he asks the same question, "are you-" he is cut off when the female growls, "NO!" she responds, irritated and in pain "I'M NOT!" do you want me to get someone to help?" he asks "NO! I CAN HANDLE THIS MYSELF!" the female snaps, making her partner jump once again "o-okay…." he stutters. It seemed to go on for an eternity before a small bundle lays on the ground squeaking faintly, the female's partner slowly comes over and notices an alarming amount of blood on the ground, the mother looked at him with dim eyes before grabbing the new baby and passing it to the father. He was confused, not knowing what to do with this tiny, fragile baby. The mother looked away as the new baby opened its eyes and looked around. "He's opened his eyes….l-look" the father says placing the baby by its mom, "w-we have to name him…." the father says, "you've looked forward to naming him didn't you?" he continues. The mother did not respond and he got worried, their son chirps and looks at his mom with the same ice blue eyes she had. "what was that name you mentioned? do you remember?" the father asks his partner. She takes in a sharp breath and looks toward him with a dim glow of cheeriness, "it was Knight…" she responds. "yes that's what it was...I..I remember now" the father says. "...you..have to take care of him….alone…" the mother whispers. The male felt a sudden shock, "alone? but...you have to be there….I can't take care of him by myself…" he says with a sorrowful tone. "I know you'll be a good father….you don't need my help…" the mother replied "..you're going to leave him with me...just like that? I'm going to be terrible alone" the male says "no...my dear….I will be there….you just won't be able to see me…" she answers before looking away, her eyes getting darker every minute. "no, please….don't die..." Knight's father says sadly. Knight squeaked, unaware of what was occurring. The female takes a final look toward her partner and touches him with her nose "I will always be there, the wind, the trees, the grass…...you just have to..listen." after this she drops and couple second later, not breathing. "WAIT NO DON'T DIE, PLEASE DON'T DIE!" the father says despairingly. When his partner doesn't move he stands there, unable to believe this was actually happening, as if the night felt his sorrow, clouds covered the moon, thunder and lightning split the skies. Knight squealed in terror and is brought close by his dad. "it's alright….I'm here" his father says.