Hey :) just to clear this up warriors twisted loyaltys is being made as well as warriors the cold blood at the same time so don't think one story is over, it isn't. I respond to reviews in next chappie and respond to PM's, anyway story (Sorry for spelling error, program doesn't have spell fix and I rushedXD)
Warrior names:
Shadowclan:
Leader
Volestar: Dark pelted tom with gray stripes down his back
Apprentice: Newtpaw
Deputy:
Snaketail: A black tom with a long tail
Medicine cat
Foxwhisker: A orange and white tom with amber eyes
Apprentice: Orangepaw
Warriors
Bushfur: A spicky gray she-cat with blue eyes
Bagerclaws: Black tom with a white stripe down his head
Apprentice: Sunpaw
Adderstrike: Light grey tom with white muzzle and belly
Apprentice: Sparkpaw
Shadowpoppy: Black she-cat with dark green eyes
Elkdawn: Brown tom with green eyes
Apprentice: Fawnpaw
Apprentices
Fawnpaw: Light brown she-cat with green eyes
Sparkpaw: Light cream colored she-cat with black ear tips
Sunpaw: Light orange she-cat with darker orange on belly
Orangepaw: Light orange tom with green eyes
Newtpaw: Dark brown/green tom with brown eyes
Queens
Amberpatch: dark reddish/orange she-cat with white feet
Darkmoon: Black she-cat with grey underbelly
(Kits: Stormkit, Hailkit, and Shykit)
Elders
Slowstride: White she-cat with weaker back legs
Thunderclan:
Leader
Lionstar: Large bright cream colored tom with lots of fur around his neck
Deputy
Squirellwhisp: Skinny orange speckled tom with blue eyes (Formerlly a Windclan warrior)
Medicine cat
Larkbreeze: Light blue tom with ice blue eyes
Apprentice: Icepaw
Warriors
Redstorm: Redish tom with white front paws
Fernblossom: White speckled she-cat with bright green eyes
Apprentice: Rainpaw
Meadowleaf: White she-cat with black stripes
Barkpelt: Dark brown tom
Apprentice: Seedpaw
Leafmist: Preety dark brown tabby she-cat with green eye
Wolfdusk: Grey tom with white ears and blue eyes
Trushpelt: Brown tom with blue eyes
Apprentices:
Icepaw: Light blue/grey she-cat with white paws
Rainpaw: Dark blue she-cat
Seedpaw: Yellow and brown tom with dark brown eyes
Queens:
Lilybush: Light grey cat with blue eyes (Mate: Squirellwhisp)
(Kits: Honeykit, Snowkit, Grasskit, Mousekit, Smallkit, Pouncekit, and Whispkit)
Elders:
Cream: Cream colored she-cat with green eyes (Formerlly a rogue)
Riverclan
Leader
Rushstar: Black short furred she-cat with green eyes
Deputy
Creekwhisper: White tom with black ears
Medicine cat
Minnowpool: Light gray tom with green eyes
Warriors
Softpetal: Long furred light cream colored she-cat
Skyfur: Dark blue tom with yellow eyes
Sandheart: Light cream colored tom with blue eyes
Apprentice: Greenpaw
Pebblefur: Grey tom with white tail tip
Fogmist: Light gray tom with white ear tips
Crowtail: White tom with black tail
Mossoak: Gray she-cat with green eyes
Waspwhisker: Light cream tom with black tail tip
Apprentices
Greenpaw: Light she-cat with white paws
Queens
Elders
Limpfoot: Brown tom with a crooked back leg
Windclan
Leader
Falconstar: White tom with black spots
Deputy
Moorheart: White she-cat with cream colored feet and belly
Medicine cat
Willowpelt: Very lean light brown she-cat with yellow eyes
Warriors
Quietcrow: Black tom with white ears
Shardfang: Grey tom with long sharp teeth
Heatherbreeze: brown/cream colored she-cat with amber eyes
Wildwind: Black hyper tom with green eyes
Hawktooth: Darker brown/gray tom with yellow eyes
Weaselclaw: Light brown tom with light cream belly
Apprentice: Applepaw
Apprentices
Applepaw: Brown tom with yellow eyes
Queens
Snowcloud: White she-cat with light blue eyes
(Kits Foxkit and Strikekit)
Softwind: Dark grey she-cat with white front paws
Elders
Sweetmist: Preety brown she cat with green eyes
Dawnflower: Bright orange she-cat with light green eyes and black belly
Prologe
The moon reflected almost perfectly on the cool water below the two cats as they stood over a pool of water. The darker tom breathed in the scents of the small pool trying to savor the scent. The orange and white tom flicked his tail in the direction of the pool.
"Come, if we don't speed this thing along we won't be back until moonhigh." The orange tom growled impatiently and without waiting for a reply started to pad down to the pool.
The darker tom growled angerly, I was going to be leader! He trotted to catch up the orange tom who wasn't making much progress down.
"Foxwhisker I am going to be leader, I decide what we do." He snarled after coming side to side with the medicine cat.
Foxwhisker turned and blinked at him with amusment.
"Yes your ideas are so great, like the time you decided to go fox hunting with all the kits." He purred his voice scratched. We need a new medicine cat soon he can hardly talk. The dark tom thought feeling agitated for this being brought up again.
"Shut up old hag! I don't care what I did!" The dark tom spat, Foxwhisker blinked at him.
"Volepelt I know that you never liked me, but leaders and medicine cats need each other." Yeah I sure need an old hag to help me, what my clan needs is fresh new warriors. Volepelt bit his togue to spit the remark. "Please we don't have to be friends but I am the medicine and you have to trust me that some times we know whats best for the clan." Foxwhisker looked at the deputy a pleading look in her eyes. She wants me to accept.
Volepelt took a deep breath and gave her a curt nod. Foxwhisker eyes shown with graditude before looking ahead again.
A few moments later they where in front of he pool of water.
"It looks so much better up close." Volepelt remarked remebering when Foxwhisker first told him about what it looks like.
Foxwhisker nodded and sat down.
"Remeber what I told you how to go to Starclan?" The medicine cat asked his eyes drooped with tiredness. Volepelt recalled Foxwhiskers words before he left camp and gave a curt a nod.
"Good." The medicine cat grunted as getting into a lying down position making sure to tuck his paws under him. Foxwhisker bent down and lapped up the water before lying his head down.
Volepelt watched amazed as the toms harsh breathes turned into steady snores like she wasn't at all old as her eyes closed.
Volepelt looked down at his reflection before doing the same, trying to copy the old cats steps to not mess up, stedily Volepelt eyes began to drop and sleep washed over him like a wave.
"Volepelt, with this life I give you compassion, use it well on your clan and other clans as well." With that Jaystar touched Volepelt's nose. Volepelt thought that the life would've been peaceful like the other eight lives he just recived but with this life was horrible. He shook all over, pain flooded through his veins like a cat dieing. He dug his claws into the ground hoping the pain would go out his claws and into the ground but to no prevail. He clenched his teeth in anger.
After a few moments the unignorable pain was down to a simple trobbing and Volepelt relaxed, he looked back up to see Jaystar stepping back into the ranks.
"Volestar! Volestar, Volestar!" The starry cats called out. Foxwhisker, who was sitting a little ways away raised his tail in approvle.
Volestar took a deep breath, he was the new leader of the best clan!
"Thank you." He breathed not able to find words to descride his indescrible feeling inside him.
Slowly one by one the starry ranks of Starclan started to fade until only Jaystar and Foxwhisker was left.
"Volestar listen closly." The old leaders eyes shown desperation to tell him something. Foxwhisker walked over to them his eyes pricked with curiosity. Jaystar closed his eyes and took a deep breath. "Four must become one to drive away a threat that comes from in the heart." Volestar snorted angerly.
"Fox dung my clan isn't a threat!" The newly named leader snarled bitterly.
Jaystar waved his tail. "Beware!" He warned as Starclan started to go fuzzy.
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