I looked in the mirror, I was wearing a black and gold sequined striped tank top, black skinny jeans gold high heels. I opened my jewelry box and pulled out a bulky gold necklace, a pair of gold chandelier earrings and several rings. I tied my brown hair into a pony tail.
I turned around and looked at Stephanie. She was wearing an old rolling stones t-shirt and dark blue skinny jeans and a pair of black flats. Her long Strawberry blond hair was in a high ponytail. We walked out of my room and down stairs. Our other friend Allie was waiting for us by the door. She had short ginger hair that just reached her ear. She was wearing a navy blue tank top and white skinny jeans and dark blue tennis shoes. She looked at me,
"Why are you bedazzled?" she asked.
"Because I look hot," I said jokingly. She rolled her eyes and walked out the door towards silver Lexus. Allie was the driver, I was shotgun and Stevie sat in the back. We drove down the road out of our small New York suburb to the city. Which took about half an hour and Allie blasting 80's music didn't help. No offense to anyone who likes 80's music.
We arrived at a small karaoke bar that was run underneath the owner's apartment. As we pulled into the parking lot across from the bar a red Ferrari pulled into the space beside us. Out of the driver's seat a blond man wearing a black suit and purple tie stepped out and started to walk to the bar. In shotgun a man also with blond hair stepped out. He was wearing a white polo and blue jeans then followed the first man.
"Is it just me or did the first guy look like Barney from "How I met your mother"?" asked Stevie. Allie and I laughed.
"I was thinking that exact same thing" said Allie as we got out of the car.
"I bet fifty bucks that he hits on one of us," said Stephanie, as we walked into the bar.
A.N: Holy crap! When I reread this I realized how bad it was and I hope you like my improvements. I hope to do this to a few other of my stories as well as update old ones.*coughanimalcough* I would also like to thank all the people who read this in the first place and didn't flam me.
-Padme17