Hey im rewriting this fan fiction to make it better
~Normal Pov~
Sebastian was just done giving Ciel tea and was on his way to the kitchen to prepare dinner when he heard a knock at the door. Who could that be Ciel isn't expecting any guest today. Sebastian thought, Sebastian made his way to the door and opened it and was surprised to see a young girl with golden honeycomb eyes she also had bubble gum pink hair that was shoulder length, wearing a pink dress that had white lace on it, she was also wearing a pink hat to match her outfit. "Hello how may I help you Miss", Sebastian asked the girl .she looked at him and took a photo out of her bag and showed it to him, "I'm looking for my cat he seemed to have ran away I was wondering if you have seen him" Sebastian looked at the picture to see a cat sitting in the grass, the cat had midnight blue hair and blue eyes, Sebastian had remembered he had found a cat in the garden a couple days ago that looked the same as the cat in the photo. "Actually I think I have please follow me and I'll show the way", Sebastian moved out of the way and gestured the young pink haired girl to come in. she slowly came into the mansion and watched as Sebastian slowly closed the door and began to walk down one of the many halls, the young girl slowly followed the older man down the hall to a room. Sebastian opened the door and moved out of the way to allow the girl into his room, as soon as the girl walked into the room she heard meowing a couple cats came out of hiding and one of them walked up to the girl meowing. She slowly picked up the cat and smiled.
"I finally found you yoru don't ever run away again ok" yoru meowed and licked Amu's cheek as she giggled, Sebastian just stood there and watched the young girl and silently chuckled to himself the young girl seemed to be very interesting. Amu looked up at Sebastian "Thank you very much sir I should be leaving now" Sebastian nodded and told Amu to go ahead as he tried to get the cats back into there hiding places. As amu was carelessly walking to the door she accidentally bumped into a young boy about her age and fell landing on top of him blushing madly, Sebastian who had put the cats back just in time to see the two on the ground chuckled and smirked "Well isn't this a lovely scene young master"
Please review and tell me if this is a better version and more understandable k :3