This is my first fanfic so I am open to any critisiom

Me: This is my first fanfic so I am open to any criticism.

Enjoy

Itachi: tell them I said hi!

Me: And Itachi says hi!

!IMPORTANT!

Itachi: this may be an itanaru or sasunaru!! A poll will be posted later

PROLOG

CRIMSON MOON

"Uhh…. Where am I?" I opened my eyes and my head was throbbing. I looked around the room I couldn't see much because the room was so dark. I could feel another person's chakra in the room. I looked around, but all I could see in the dark was the metal floor which was currently freezing my feet, the metal wall, there was a bed with stains of blood, and a toilet that looked liked it needed to be fixed and cleaned. From my surroundings I could tell I was being held in a cell.

"So you're finally awake?" A voice that sent shivers threw my bones spoke. The icyness of the voice pierced my skin making me feel colder than I already was, if that was possible.

I twisted my head around to see where the voice was coming from, but I couldn't tell where it was. I fearless leader of akuma was beginning to feel a little scared and safe at the same time like I knew the voice.

"Are you ready?" The voice said ecoing around the room. Making it so I couldn't tell where it was coming from.

"Ready for what?" I asked then it hit me why I was here. I handed myself over and asked for my ending.

Everything has an ending. My just came too soon. When your face to face with your death it just makes you realize how much you want to live.

"Are you ready to die Naruto Uzumaki?" the dark voice said without any emotion coming from his voice. Just pure emotionless sound.

I wanted to scream to yell. Tell them I changed my mind that I didn't want to die. But I couldn't speak. I was so scared that my voice got stuck in my throught. As the man came closer and closer to me, he slowly gained a shaped instead of being a big blob in the shadow. He lifted up his sword straight to my face. As the blade was right up to my face I could tell who it was……

Itachi!

Me: well what do u think? And I need hard constructive criticism! Also itachi has something to say.

Itachi: thank you kitsune. Now if u press that pretty purple button that says review then u get an all expense payed trip to Virtualand where virtual cookies reign
supreme, but you also get lots of spending money to spend in their yummy
virtual sweet shops

I would like to thank xXxFrostyIceCubexXx for the vurtualand thing that I took from her. I did not make she did so all credit goes to her!

I would also like to thank sugardash for reading this thank you!!