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Chapter 1: Wounded
Two months after Breaking Dawn
Bella's POV
I walked down the stairs with my daughter on my hands. Edward was at my side with his hand around my waist. We had came here this morning and had passed all the day here. Renesmee was asleep now. Her heartbeat was the only thing that was heard in all the house apart of the low murmurs of the rest of our family around the house. We were only getting to the river when Edward stopped walking.
I pulled my shield down. It still took a bit effort to pull it out but I managed it well. What's wrong? I asked through thought.
"Renesmee" he said as he took our daughter. He nudged her awake and smiled down at her when she opened her eyes, "Hey pumpkin." Renesmee smiled weakly. Edward passed her back to me.
"Hey baby girl" I said. "Had a bad dream?" She nodded and placed her hand on my cheek. She replayed her dream to me. It was just a little kid nightmare. I kissed her hair, "Don't worry" I whispered. "It was only a dream."
She nodded. I know, she placed on my head. She refused to talk and it was some times difficult to communicate with her when I was at a far distance. I wasn't Edward. The more I could do was protect our minds.
"Lets get going" Edward said and we ran full speed to our cottage. Renesmee fell asleep again as we got there. We didn't turn on the light since our eyes had already adjusted to the darkness of the place. I slowly made my way to Renesmee's room and placed her in her bed. I pulled the covers over her and then placed a light kiss on her forehead. Edward warped his arms around my waist as he hugged me. "She's beautiful" he whispered in my ear.
"I know" I said and turned to him. I quickly pecked his lips and then we walked to our room.
We were both on out bed. I had my eyes closed. We still hadn't lost track of time but it seemed like a minute ago when we lay down on our bed. Time was not an obstacle for me anymore. Why would it be if I now had all the time in history? I was immortal just like Edward now. Edward stood up after kissing my forehead. He always did that when Renesmee was about to wake up. Someone had to make Renesmee's food. While Edward prepared dinner I quickly made my way to Renesmee. She was still sleeping. I waited until she opened her eyes.
"Hey there baby girl" I said. She smiled and touched my cheek. Morning, she placed in my head. I smiled and kissed her forehead. I picked her up from her bed and walked away with her in my arms. Edward was just setting the bacon and eggs on the plate when I got to him. He made that crooked smile that I so much love as he set the plate on the table and sat across from it. Renesmee pulled free out of my hands and sat down.
"No Renesmee, I don't think it would be a good idea" Edward said.
I frowned. "What?"
"Alert number five" he said. That meant that she heard Alice speaking about taking me and her shopping. I really never liked to go but Renesmee seemed to be the opposite of me. She liked to go shopping with her aunts and it was obvious on her hair and her ability.
I rolled my eyes and pulled my shield down. We went last Saturday, I thought to Edward. He nodded. "They don't think the same. Your best friend is here."
I smiled. "Thanks" I made my way to the door and opened it. Jacob was on the other side. My best friend and my future son-in -law if my daughter accepted him. We had decided to tell Renesmee when she was physically ready so she still didn't know anything about what the imprint was.
"Hey Bells" he said with a smile.
"Hey Jake" I said.
"Jakey" Renesmee chimed and rand into Jacob. She leaped and crushed into his chest as he caught her into a hug. Kissed her forehead and shifted her weight so that she was on his left side.
"Come in" Edward said. "We bited yesterday" he added. Jacob rolled his eyes. He walked in closing the door behind himself. We had gone hunting yesterday and he had came along. He caught some mountain tigers for Renesmee. It was easy to go hunting with him but the bad thing was that his stench erased almost any track of animals. Of course Renesmee didn't see it the same way.
Jacob sighed. "We found a track of three vampires last night. I have no idea of who it was so I spoke to Carlisle but he said that he still hadn't seen any vampires lately. Luckily it seems that they were just passing by because no one disappeared and the track led straight to the north."
I nodded. "So there is nothing to worry about. That's good." I looked at Edward. He frowned. "What's wrong?" I asked worried. He said nothing. He just walked out the door leaving it open. I walked after him and signalled Jacob to stay in the cottage with Renesmee. I quickly pulled my shield over Edward and me just in case. Then a few vampires came out of the trees stopping a few matters away. They weren't vampired.
"Hello" the only male said. "My name is Faron and I've been told that Dr. Cullen lives here close. Do you know where does he live?" I looked at all of them. They all were half-breeds.
Edward nodded. "He's my father, may I ask why?"
"I need him to heal this" he said and pulled up his
sleeve showing a large ugly burn. It didn't look like if it was healing.
"How did that happen?" I asked.
"Long story" he said. "We were attacked by a powerful vampire."
I nodded slowly. "Oh" it was all I could say.
"Lets go then" Edward said. He turned to me. "Stay here with Renesmee and Jacob." I smirked and nodded. I pulled my shield out of us both. Anything to avoid shopping, I thought. He kissed my lips before running away with the other hybrids. Even if I didn't know why I felt a bit of pity for that wounded hybrid. There was something in him that seemed to be kind. I shook my head at the thought and walked back in into the cottage.
"Hybrids" I told Jacob when he was about to ask.
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