Hey. Thanks for opening up my story. This is my first fan fiction so it probably isn't the best. Please review. And if you have any advise, I'd really appreciate it.
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Ch 1: Captured
Kisshu's POV:
"When are we going to Earth again?" I mumbled. Taruto, Pai, and I were in our space ship. We hadn't attacked the mews for days and I needed some action.
"Yeah, I'm bored," agreed Taruto.
"Be patient," Pai said, "I'm in the middle of some important research." He then returned his gaze to some weird image on a monitor.
"OK, you do that. I'm going out," I said. Taruto jumped up.
"Me, too." Before Pai could say anything, we teleported to Earth. We appeared in that little park Ichigo seemed to love so much. People were walking around and enjoying themselves as always.
"It's so peaceful. But I can fix that." I said as I summoned up a predisite. I grinned at the little jelly-like creature. Then I threw it at a nearby tree. The tree shook violently as it grew and changed until it became an all out monster. "Let's get this party started." I said with a grin. My tree monster let out a terrifying roar as it stalked off to destroy the park. People screamed and ran in panic from my terrible creation. Taruto laughed.
"Humans are fun." He said.
"Stop right there!" a familiar voice shouted from behind us. Just in time, I thought. Taruto and I turned around to see the Mew Mews: Zakuro, Lettuce, Mint, Pudding, and Ichigo. Oh yeah, and that blond dude. What was his name? Anyway, the girls stood in front of us as we floated about 10 feet in the air. Pudding and Zakuro ran over to attack my monster while the others kept their focus on us.
"Ribbon…Lettuce Rush!" Lettuce shouted as she attacked. We quickly teleported out of the way.
"Ribbon…Mint Echo!" Mint shouted as she released an arrow. I moved out of the way as it flew past.
"This is too easy." I said. Taruto laughed.
"You guys suck." Then I noticed Ichigo began to spin as light wrapped around her. She was charging her attack! When she had stopped spinning she held her weapon above her head and shouted,
"Ribbon Strawberry Surprise!" I teleported away as a beam of light hit where I had been just seconds before.
"You missed." I sneered. Then I noticed a small figure falling toward the ground. I looked closer. "Taruto!" I shouted. There was a loud bang as he hit the ground. "Taruto!"
"Ribbon Pudding Ring Inferno!" I quickly flew out of the way of Pudding's attack. Zakuro and Pudding went over to join the others after defeating my tree monster. Then they all looked at me.
"Ribbon…"
"Lettuce Rush!"
"Mint Echo!"
"Pudding Ring Inferno!"
"Zakuro Spear!"
"Strawberry Surprise!" I closed my eyes. I'm sorry, Taruto. Right before the attacks hit, I teleported away.
Taruto's POV:
The first thing I noticed was the voices. They were very faint, as if I was listening to them through a wall. I couldn't move. Couldn't open my eyes. Only hear.
"Why do we have to keep Taru-Taru in there na no da?"
"Yes, this isn't right, Ryou."
"Shhh! I think he's waking up."
"Ugh." I mumbled as I forced my eyes open. I was in a black room with a single large glass window on one wall. Through the window I could see Pudding, Lettuce, and that blond haired guy looking at me. Who was he? I think his name was Ryou or something. I was lying on a small white bed in the middle of the room. Then I noticed a bunch of cords attached to my arm. What the heck? I tried to pull them off but I couldn't. I suddenly got nervous with them staring at me so I tried to sit up. I was hit by a wave of pain and was forced to lie back down. "
Ryou, why don't we just let him go?" Lettuce asked the blonde.
"No. It's time we make him talk." He replied. I didn't like the sound of that. I propped myself up with my elbow so I could see them better. The Ryou guy pulled out a microphone and began to speak into it. It made his words a lot clearer. "Tell us where your ship is." I looked at him. Was he crazy?
"Why would I tell you that?" I asked. He pulled out some odd device.
"This is why." he said and pushed the button in the middle.
Pudding's POV:
I watched as Taruto was zapped by Ryou's weird machine. "Why are you hurting Taru-Taru?" I asked in shock.
"He wouldn't talk." He said plainly. How could Ryou be so heartless? I turned back to Taruto in the room. He had fallen off the bed and was now crouching on the floor. "Ready to talk?" Ryou asked with a grin. Taruto didn't reply. "There's no way out but to cooperate." he said. Then Taruto stood up using the bed as support. And vanished. He had teleported. I gave a sigh of relief. Then he was suddenly flung back into the room by an unseen force. He hit the wall on the opposite side of the room, slid down the wall, and hit the floor. He laid there motionless on the floor. I gasped. Ryou laughed. "How stupid do you think I am, kid?" he asked the still form. Taruto didn't move. I couldn't turn away from that terrible sight. Taruto lay on the cold floor, his clothes torn and singed, his face covered in scratches, his arms bloody and bruised, and a small trickle of blood coming from his lips. I felt an aching pain deep in my chest.
"Taru-Taru…"
Well, how did you like the first chapter? I know it didn't really go with the title but I'll try to make it a lot better as the story goes on. Please review!
