DISCLAIMER: I'm not Veronica Roth. I do not own divergent...

Chapter 1:

Beatrice POV

I woke up from the tapping sun-light against my face, wondered how long I'd been sleeping. I blinked, shut my eyes, blinked again. I yawned, managed to fully open both eyes. I realize that I should be up and be preparing breakfast for my family. Why? Well it's the abnegation thing to do. I have never really been fit for abnegation unlike my brother who was a perfect example of what an abnegation child should be. I try very hard to be selfless, but I find it very difficult sometimes.

Our breakfast is always the same, scrambled eggs. Maybe for some occasions we get plain pancakes. Abnegation has taught us that "extravagance is considered self indulgent and unnecessary." We all say our good mornings and eat quietly. Children are not allowed to talk unless spoken to while we're eating. After breakfast is done, my parents clean it up since my brother and I had set it up. Afterwards Caleb and I start walking to school. Im in fourth grade but Caleb is in fifth grade since he is ten months older than me and I was born after the cut off date.

〰〰〰〰〰〰〰 〰〰〰〰〰skip till after school〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰

I had to walk by the faction less sector because I gave my seat to a candor boy on the bus. While I was walking down the alley, I heard someone crying. I looked around and finally saw a boy probably older than me crying in the corner. I think he's my neighbor. I walked closer to him and asked him "why are you crying?" He gets a horrified look on his face but finally answers, " I can't tell you."

"It's okay, I'm Beatrice, Whats your name?", I said.

By now he's stopped crying but won't look up

"I'm Tobias, I'm eleven years old", he said.

His voice was very deep for a 11 year old.

"I'm nine years old, I believe my dad works for your dad. His name is Andrew prior." I said.

"I know, I've came to your house for dinner one time" he responds quietly as he finally looks up.

He has a spare upper lip, full lower lip, deep-set dark blue eyes (so dark they are almost black, with a small patch of lighter blue on the left iris right next to the corner of his eye), long lashes, deep voice, and short hair. His eyes were mesmerizing.

"I still have to walk home, would you like to join me?", I offered hoping he would say yes. He silently nods his head and gets up. I have a big smile on my face , trying not to make it obvious that I'm happy that he said yes.

As we walked home, we talked about our hobbies, favorite color, and I asked about his family but he would always change the subject. While we were walking you could see the dauntless getting on the trains. I look at Tobias and see that he is looking at the dauntless too, "I've always admired the dauntless, maybe I could fit in with them, when I turn 16 I'm going to choose dauntless."

Tobias looked at me, his eyes wide. Whoops I guess I said that out loud.

"It's okay Beatrice, I always admired the dauntless too, I love everything about them, their bravery and loyalty. One day, we will both be able to transfer to dauntless. I think we're going to be great friends Beatrice."

Please review and tell me How I can make it better. I would love to hear your thoughts on this. I took many different stories and tried to out them together. Please try and not to make too many negative comments:/

I'll post more later today:)

-this is also my first fanfic:)

~divergentxoxo