Ok well I was watching Four brothers and I didn't want Jack to die, and I felt bad that the white boys weren't gettin no love. So this story is set two remedy those two things, I hope you like it.

This first chapter is really short, and it is set in the present. The next few chapter will be set as flashbacks, but I will put a little reminder at the top to let you know whats going on.

Summary: She had lived with the Mercer's for a few weeks, being shuffled through the foster system she had landed in this home with this woman and her four sons. She is finally adopted and taken away her and an older girl named Michelle, but not before each of them had fallen for the two white males in the house. Now they were back in Detroit and the boys were gone, only to be brought back together by the death of the sweetest woman in the world. Now together they would have face Detroits largest crime boss.

"JACK!!!"

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Rachel had heard Jack yelling at someone outside so she had come to investigate. Jack was running toward a guy in hoodie, Rachel stepped down off her porch and was trying to get a better look. Then the hooded figure pulled out a gun, aimed, and fired one round right into Jack's right shoulder, he dropped to his knees. The gunman was about to end it all when Bobby ran out, and shot the guy dead in the chest with his shotgun.

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A heartbeat went by and Rachel was off, she ran across the yard in front of Bobby and was pulling Jack underneath his shoulders, just as the black van pulled up and two more guys with automatics stepped out and took aim. Fortunately Bobby and Angel took them down giving Rachel a little more time to pull Jack to his feet and to the back of the house. She laid him down on the kitchen floor and grabbed a dish towel from the stove. She put it to his shoulder and grabbed her cell phone from her pocket calling for 911. She was sitting on her knees pressing the towel into his shoulder yelling for the operator to send Lt. Green. Bullets flew around her, Jerry rushed by into the laundry room, then a new guy came through and Jerry grabbed him and stabbed him repeatedly with a knife. The masked man slumped to the floor and Jerry ran out the back door. For a brief moment Rachel thought everyone was dead and now Jerry was leaving. The thought left her when she saw Angel through a window sliding off the house to stop some guy from shooting Bobby in the back. Everything was chaotic and she spared a glance at Jack, his face wasn't contorted as it had been before and he had his hand on her thigh where she sat next to him.

His lips formed words so softly that she barely heard them "Your legs work…"

"Only for you Jack" She whispered back.

Well I hope you like remember to review please, let me know what you think.

Same Time, Same Place.