Wingless: This story is going to be totally off the chain.

Sasuke: *skimming through the rough draft making wingless blush* You seriously think this garbage is going to draw in a crowd. Most of this crap isn't even accuratly correct. I would never do something like that.

Wingless: *recoils like she was just slapped* Well I happen to think it was kinda awesome now I'm alittle embarassed to show everyone. *blushes and hides face*

Hinata: *blushes furiously and stutters frequently* Wingless does not own any of the characters and settings.

wingless: Thank you Hinata. START THE FREAKING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I wake up on a bench in an unknown place. Still the first thing i try to recall is, 'What happened?', instead of 'where am T?. I was at the park. i had stopped there foor some alone time on my way home from school. Suddenly I was attacked by a boy who said he was going to kill me. When I tried to use my telekinesis on him he sucked me into a portal that blocked me from using my powers. He gave me a katana and after a few awesome flips , air twists, and sword attacks the portal we were in tried to self-destruct. He called me a wench and said next time your dead and i went through another portal but I fainted because of the pressure from portal was cutting my air supply short. Now I am not in the park anymore. It looks like a forest park or some training ground path. I am still tired so I figure tomorrow is a new day and now I should worry about catching some Z's. I fall asleep right there on the bench.

Wingless: so how do you guys like it so far. if you dont like it please lie or you know what don't say any thing.

Whole room: *silence and crickets playing in the backround as they galre at wing meanacingly*

wingless: come on guys it wasn't that bad was it? *everybody nods*

*wingless goes stone faced and sweaty with her mouth wide open and as the bugs fly in it is up to shy little Hinata to end this so while stuttering and playing with her fingers nervously she speaks*

Hinata: please rate and message wingless to tell her if she went wrong anywhere so far the best time to clean up mistakes is in the beginning.