Hey, people of the internet! This is my first fanfiction based on the popular anime: Naruto. It's basically the introduction of a new character and his impact on the storyline.
Please excuse any minor grammatical errors since English is not my first language. Any constructive criticism and ideas are appreciated. Enough talk! Lets get down to the prologue!
Raiden woke up, nauseous. He felt like he had not been asleep for a month. Yet there was something unusual, he had woken up not knowing where he is, or in that matter who he is. He shook his head thinking it would improve the nausea. After regaining proper control of his arms and legs, he searched his pockets. He found some Ryo and a young picture of him, a woman and a man. Raiden's jet black hair had now grown longer. He kept them neatly kept on the left side followed by letting them flow in such a way that the first two bangs grew longer, followed by the final bang which was really long. The hair flowed towards the right exposing both his black eyes. He flipped the picture, to see the words RAIDEN. "That must be my name, and these people must be my parents." He thought. He looked around, saw trees everywhere. The woods were dense. He got up brushed himself off. He noticed he was wearing a black upper with high collars followed with multiple red circles encircled in each other on the back. A white shirt, a necklace with 6 black tomao signs hanging from it, black pants followed by blue sandals.
Still confused, he started walking and finally found a paved path. That was a relief on his part since wasn't lost. He decided to follow it. After a couple of hours of travel he decided to rest. Suddenly some bushes hustled. Raiden decided to investigate. Then, out of nowhere a bandit wearing a mask jumped him. He backed off whilst maintaining his balance.
"Give me everything you got." demanded the bandit.
"I don't have anything." replied Raiden.
"That's too bad."
Suddenly the bandit reached for his kunai and was about to stab him when someone came out of nowhere and punched the bandit unconscious.
"Are you okay?" Said the stranger
"Yeah." Raiden replied, still in shock.
"Damn bandits will spring out of nowhere."
"How did you do that?"
"Huh, Do what?" Said the stranger
"You sprang out of nowhere and knocked out this bandit."
"Oh, that's because I'm a shinobi"
"Hmm, what's that sign on your head band?"
"That's the sign of the hidden leaf village. The place where I live. By the way I'm Naruto Uzumaki."
"I'm Raiden. Thank you for saving me."
"No problem." Responded naruto with a goofy smile
"Which way does this path lead too?"
"Naruto! We're getting late hurry up!" a girl yelled, who had pink short hair. She grew a little surprised when she saw Raiden's face.
"To the hidden leaf, anyway it was nice meeting you. Bye."
And Naruto jumped on a tree branch and departed.
After much contemplation, it became obvious to Raiden what his new goal in life was; to become a shinobi and to achieve that he must travel to the hidden leaf.