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This is my 1st story so cut me some slack

Note: I don't own the Sisters Grimm or any material in this story that seems real : songs, brands, ETC.

Setting: in the woods (during the 1st book) Puck watches girls arrive at Granny Relda's (old women) for the 1st time:

"Look at those girls" thought Puck the Fairy ( The fairy from the famous book A Midsummer Night's Dream by Shakespeare) "They are so should try to spend one night out here, but they would probably be killed by a rabbit, or chipmunk, or maybe even a caterpillar" he thought to himself with a smirk. Then he had an idea " Maybe I should try to have some fun with them, the old women did say that they try to escape from wherever they live so they are bound to try to escape tonight" Puck picked up a wooden flute then blew a few notes into it just then a swarm of little glowing pixies came around him. " "My minions" he said as he spoke to them in a loud voice"There are two peasants threatening my kingdom. We should teach them who the trickster king is". The pixies made a twittering sort of sound that sounded like laughter. He motioned them to stop "OK here is the plan" and he and the pixies started planning. Puck and his minions waited until nightfall to take action. Suddenly, somebody opened a window. Puck gave the signal and the pixies flew toward the window. But it shut almost instantly the second they were at the window."BAM!" the pixies smacked into the window and then they returned to Puck. He was disappointed but was determined. He waited a couple more hours until the front door of the house opened up and two small figures stepped out of the house. Again he blew his flute to signal a pixie to be ready. Then the smaller figure said "What was that?" she had heard Pucks flute! The taller one replied "probably just the wind". Puck noticed a dog whining behind them. "I hope this works" he thought as the taller figure said, " Look Daphne here is the big menacing invader Mr. Skin and Bones was afraid would get into the house." The pixie circled her head "Pretty I got one to" the one named Daphne said. The dog started growling Daphne whispered something to the other one. "Hush up the taller girl said to the dog. "Sabrina" said Daphne, "What's wrong"? the girl named Sabrina asked "It just bit me" "Excellent" thought Puck as he snickered. Daphne let out a cry, "Ouch I got bit again" Puck blew his flute again and all the pixies attacked them. A sea of glowing lights charged toward them . Sabrina screamed to Daphne "Cover your face and hands and run" Then the old women stepped out "Aw man" Puck thought as the women took out a blue dust and blew it on some of his pixies. "I have a whole house full of this" she yelled. The pixies hesitated for a moment then flew into the woods back to Puck . Then the women spoke again "That wasn't very nice" then she took both girls and the dog back into the house.

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