So... thats my first fanfic... It's a victory, because untill last year a had no idea about how to speak or write in english... I wrote this one at 4a.m. I was pretty sleepy... so, if that story sounds nonsense or with some grammar or lexical errors, please, I want you guys to show me, I'm still learning... Hope you enjoy it :)
Sanya's Thoughts
It was raining in my cold sweet home, Ourussia. I was coming back from my night patrol and I was very tired... Now, in the base, I was about to go to my room, but I had noticed a half opened door on the other side of the corridor. It was Eila's bedroom. So, I didn't have any second thoughts before step inside there and fall half asleep by her side.
She didn't wake up like she always did... Then I just opened my eyes and looked at her face... my thoughts started to fly away... how beautiful she is... her soft skin... her white blond hair was like the clouds... the way that she blushes while sleep was so cute and delicate... It was easy to think that was an angel sleeping by my side... She must be so tired... Helping me to find my parents even during her trainings and missions...
Since I discovered that she was in love with me my heart couldn't stop running awkwardly and she didn't know that I knew about her feelings… Just happened to me to find her diary opened in some random page and that was written with her type... Ok, I was amazed and happy, because my feelings were the same as hers... But I never had any idea about how to tell her it without ruin our friendship... And now, even I knowing about her feelings I just can't say about mines... I have no idea about how to say it! Someone, help me here please!
So with that final thought my mind was turning back to the normal state and I noticed Eila staring me with those gorgeous violet eyes and a smiling sleepy face... My heart just stopped. "Sanya... good morning..." said her before a huge yawn. I tried to recover my heart beating, but it was impossible... SO I said probably the most stupid thing that I could have said in all my life. "Would you please stop being so gorgeous?" She looked at me with a weird expression and I blushed hardly... So, she blushed at the same and while a yawn escaped by my mouth she said "Have you ever watched yourself in a mirror, Sleeping Beauty?"
The silence was quick before we started to laugh without reason and I don't know how, we stopped with hand in hand and staring each other again... So, she started caressing my hand and I couldn't help but embrace her as tight as I could. She smiled and did the same in response...
Yeah, I was in heaven in her arms... But too tired to do anything else... She noticed that and planted a kiss on my forehead... "Go sleep, you need to... WAIT! You're in my bedroom?!" I was pretty sleepy, so I just heard her sigh and her classic words "Geez... Just for today, okkay? You really need to rest... and me too..." So we fell asleep on each other arms...
The end... (or not) please, tell me your critices and suggestions if you want ^^