AR: Hi Everyone! I was inspired to write a fanfic about one of my favorite movies when I was young, " Treasure Planet". I hope you enjoy this story even though its the first Chapter! Enjoy!
Treasure Planet: The Journey to Slither Planet
Chapter 1: The mission, return of John Silver and off the wrong foot meet and greet part 1
In BenBow Inn,
It has been two years since the journey to Treasure Planet. Delbert and Amelia were chatting away about their journey to Treasure Planet to Sarah Hawkins, Jim's mother as their children were in their basket. Ben came in with cake and a ton of plates and baby bottles as Morph follows.
" It would be nice to go back out their and explore the outer space again." Amelia said with wonder and glee as she lay on her husbands right shoulder.
" Sarah, If you would have been on the ship, you would love the stars and the creatures we saw." Delbert told his friend and the mother of the military cadet who is still in the academy.
" Sounds fascinating as it was Delbert. I just wonder what Jim is doing." Sarah said to her friend as she wonders in happiness with a hint of wariness.
" Don't Worry Mrs. Hawkins! Jimmy is fine! I bet he is having a blast right now!" Ben told Sarah as he lays down the cake on the table.
" Thank you Ben." Sarah said to the robot with a kind smile on her face.
" I wonder how you are doing Jim?" Delbert thought to himself as he smiles at his wife and children.
Somewhere in the market place of Montressor,
Our fellow teenage hero Jim Hawkins whom is now 19 years of age and is chasing after a criminal in a cloak had stole an important item from one of top businesses in Montressor. He and some other military cadets at Interstellar academy were ordered to go after the criminal in the black cloak and retrieve the item. Their General didn't say what was the item that was taken, but they are just following orders. Jim is using his solar surfer to catch up to the criminal since one of his commanding superiors of their mission told them to spilt up, Jim took up the opportunity.
" Surrender now and we won't have to do this the hard way!" Jim told the mysterious criminal as he ran even faster from Jim.
" Fine! Hard way it is." Jim mutters to himself as he rode faster on his Solar Surfer to catch up to the criminal.
While this was happening,
A beautiful young woman, Slightly tan, hazel eyes, shoulder length light ash brown hair
and at the age of 18 was searching for something important. She wears a white pirate style shirt with a lace up neckline, a black vest, a black cotton sash, black velour stretch pants and her brown pirate knee boots, her golden locket and a red and black bandana that she wears as a headband.
This young lady or woman to prefer is a young adventurer and her name is Allison Alexandra Lilliana Scott. She rather prefer to be called Al.
Allison is wearing a white cloak around her right now in order to blend in the crowd of Montressor.
" Okay Al! You just need to find the Map in order to locate Slither Planet. It's the only way to fulfill my long lasting mission. Once I found it, I go back to my ship and head towards the location." Al thought to herself as she looks through the planet's market place. Al had a hard time finding the item she needed and thats where our two protagonist's collide for the firs time.
Al's POV
Ugh! Where is that map! Then, I saw something glimmering from the right side of my eye. It is a dark purple orb that looked like it was containing something. Its...the MAP! Finally! I have to hurry and buy the map before someone else buys it. I ran towards the market that was selling useful items for pirates and navigators and began to pay for the map.
" Excuse me sir! I want that Map that you are selling!" I said to the merchant.
End POV
Jim was getting closer and closer to the criminal in the black cloak running away with the item.
"Almost there! I just need to be a little bit closer to that guy." Jim thought to himself as gotten closer to the mysterious criminal in the black cloak. Al finish paying for the map and thanks the merchant for selling it to her. The criminal spotted the map that Al held in her hand an knew which map it was.
" The map to Slither Planet! Captain will be pleased." The criminal thought to himself as he began to run towards our fellow Adventurer in a greedy manner. Al spots the cloaked person and knew from the top of her head that he was after the map.
" Time to ride!" Al thought to herself as she took out an golden orb that has a red button on top, clicks the button as the orb turns into a Solar Surfer. Al hops onto her Solar surfer and rides away from the cloak stranger. Al did not notice that the cloak stranger has a pair of black wings and began to fly after her. Jim saw the scene happening and rode even faster spotting the other Cadets from the sides of the market.
" Great! Now the all mighty leader decides to regroup!" Jim thought to himself as he chases after two cloaked strangers.
Al's POV
Perfect! Just what I needed right now! A Winged stranger going after my map! Just Perfect! I spotted him getting close to me. Alright then! If the creature wants to play follow the leader, game on!
Jims POV
It's bad enough that my leader told us to split up instead of staying together! Now I have another person in the mix!
Looks like I have to go even faster.
I rode maximum speed trying to catch up to the stealer and the mysterious person who has a solar surfer besides me.
"OH NO YOU DON'T! IT BELONGS TO ME SO BACK OFF PIRATE!" I heard the person yell at the stealer. So this creature is a pirate. So why would a pirate steal from a huge popular business.
Crap! Im about to crash into that person!
" OUT OF THE WAY!" I told the person as my eyes widen with shock and fear.
Al's POV
Okay! Almost there to home base! Just have to soar a few more miles.
" Hello little girl." I turn around to the voice that is near me. He's quick, but now he's given me the chance to take a look at his features. Its pitch black with the hood over his head. I spot a red and silver fang tattoo on his arm.
Wait a minute! I know that tattoo!
He's started to grab my hand and tries to take my Map.
"OH NO YOU DON'T! IT BELONGS TO ME SO BACK OFF PIRATE!" I shout at him as I fought for my map.
"OUT OF THE WAY!" I heard a person shout towards my direction.
"Huh?" I said out loud.
I turn around and spot a person coming towards me with solar surfer besides me.
Oh Crap!
"Goodbye Little girl" The pirate said to me as he snatches the map out of the grip of my hand and flew away from me.
NO!
I turn around again and then...
CRASH
Jim and Allison crashed into each other and landed on the ground. Jim sat up as he saw his target flying far away with the orb in his hand.
"Ugh! He got away! Worst day ever!" Jim thought to himself as he gripped his hair angrily.
*Groan*
Jim faces the hooded person as it sits up and the body language of the person changes as it looks up at the sky and their fist clench tightly. Jim thought maybe the stranger would know the thief.
"Hey you!" Jim shouts at the hooded stranger until he spots his other cadet members running towards the hooded stranger and began to surround it.
"What are you guys doing!" Jim shouts at his cadet group in a mild angry tone.
"Arresting the thief Hawkins. Since you let the criminal escape, it might be an accomplice!" His cadet leader replies to Jim as his tone was snottier as ever.
"But this person didn't do anything wrong! Just a regular bystander I accidentally crashed into!" Jim said to his captain as he tries to defend the hooded stranger.
" GRR! Let go of me you Idiots!" Said the mysterious hooded stranger. The mysterious hooded stranger sounded feminine.
Jim walks in front of the hooded stranger and saw hazel eyes glaring at him. He grabs the hood and pulls it off the stranger only to find a shocking surprise.
"A girl!?" Jim thought as he was hoping that his eyes were not deceiving him.
" Congratulations! You figured out my gender. Hooray!" Al said to the cadets in her sarcastic tone.
"Quiet thief! We are going to report you to our general of our Hero Academy!" The Cadet leader said to Al as they held her against her will.
"Oh Great! The big baby wants to take me to his mommy when he's upset. Just perfect." Al mummers under her breathe as no one heard except for Jim as he tried not to laugh.
"That does not mean that your off the hook Cadet Hawkins!" Said the Cadet leader as he glares at Jim. Jim rolls his eyes as the head cadet gave the signal to return back to the academy.
At Interstellar Academy,
Jim and Al were sitting outside the generals office as Jim's Cadet leader was speaking with the General. Jim and Al just hears the leader and general speaking to each other.
"The general would like to see you two inside his office now!" said the Cadet Leader as he smirks at the both of them.
Al and Jim enter the office and see's a lion bear like man in a red uniform trying to finish up his documents.
"Well if it isn't Mr. James Pleiades Hawkins. What a surprise to see you yet again in my office." the General said to him.
"Pfft! Your middle name is Pleiades!" Al said to Jim as she tries to hold back her laughter.
"Shut up!" Jim mutters to the girl as he glares at Al.
"I can't help it! It's so original for a middle name!" Al replies to Jim as she laughs softly.
The general looks up and spots Al and stopped writing. Al notice his facial appearance as she stops laughing at Jim.
"Allison Alexandra Lilliana Scott?" The general said to her as his facial expression looked like he saw a ghost.
"Hi General Alan." Al greets a friend of her parents.
"Pfft! Your name Allison Alexandra Lilliana!" Jim said to her as he holds back his laughter.
" Shut up!" Al said to him as she glares at him.
"I can't help it! It's so original for a name! Ring a bell to you!" Jim said to Al as he gets back at her for making fun of his middle name.
"Silence you two!" General Alan said to the two teens in front of him. The two of them stayed quiet and still.
"Cadet Paterson! You said this person is a partner of the criminal that you let escape?" General Alan asks the Cadet in strict manner.
"Yes General! This thief must have been been a accomplice with the criminal." The cadet replies to the General.
"Let's get one thing straight! I was buying a map in order to a destination of mine! Then I crashed into this imbecile here and my map was stolen by the criminal which I know by all of space!" Al explains herself angrily.
"Now wait a minute! This wouldn't have happen if you had interfere by using your Solar surfer and trying to race him! He would've been in our grasp by now!" Jim said to Al as he got in her face.
"For one thing! I was not racing him! He was chasing me because I had my map which I bought with my own money! Two I know the criminal because he's a pirate from a well known Crew in Space!" Al said to Jim as they were face to face.
"SILENCE YOU TWO!"General Alan shouts at the two of them as they were not seeing eye to eye.
"Now Allison, please tell me who was the criminal that have escape Montressor?" Alan ask Al in a curious manner.
"It is a pirate who is apart of Fang. Poison Fang." Al replies to Alan in a serious tone. Alan is shocked and went into a new found serious expression that Jim and his Cadet leader have never seen before.
"Hawkins! Paterson! Please leave the two of us alone." Alan said to the two cadets. The two cadets left the room, but Jim stayed behind the closed door and began to listen in on the conversation.
"Listen Allison, I know you despise that crew, but your parents would't want you to-I know that already!" Alan was interrupted by Al knowing she was still cold hearted about her parents accident.
"All I want is my map back and then I'm on my way to explore more of space on my ship with my crew uncle! Just give me a chance!"Al said Alan as she looks at him with a serious expression on her face.
" *Sigh* Fine Allison. You can go on this mission, but on one condition!" Alan told his niece knowing that her safety is needed.
"Mr. Hawkins! Please step away from the door and come back inside for a minute." Alan shouts from his office knowing that the young cadet was listening on their conversation.
"Yes General." Jim said to Alan as he looks at him wondering what the general wanted from him.
"Mr. Hawkins you will be assisting my niece on a journey to find criminal and bring him back to Montressor."Alan said to him as he told Jim the assignment.
"WHAT?! WITH HIM/HER!?" The two young teens shouted at Alan with bewilderedness.
"If you want to capture this pirate and retrieve your map, you have to have at least someone from this academy to assist you on your journey! Do I make myself clear?" Alan said to his niece.
"Crystal uncle Alan. But! We do it my way!"Al said to her uncle knowing that she been exploring Space for a long time now.
"As you wish Allison. The both of you may leave my office and head on to your new found journey." Alan said to the both of them. Jim and Al left his office as he sighs sadly and looks at a picture frame of a young girl with her parents, a white tiger wolf pup and him as a young adult smiling happily.
Outside the Academy,
Jim and Al are outside as they both sighed frustratingly at the situation that they are in.
"Well Allison, I guess we are going to be partners." Jim said to her as she felt agitated.
"Listen up Military boy! I am not your partner nor your mate! And don't call me Allison! It's either Captain or Scott!" Al said to Jim as she grabs him by his shirt and glares at him.
"Doesn't this sound familiar." Jim thought to himself.
"Got it military boy?" Al asks him as she still glares at him.
"Got it Captain." Jim said to Al as he glares back at her.
"Good." Al said to Jim as she let go of his shirt.
"Since you are apart of this mission, you choose the people that you want to take with you and I'll choose my plus one." Al said to him to make it at least fair for the both of them.
"Sounds fair, but you have to follow me to where I'm heading." Jim said to Al.
"Fine! But we take my ship."Al said to the Cadet. Jim nods in agreement and follows her to he ship.
AR: Well this is the first chapter of Treasure planet: The journey to Slither planet! I hope you enjoy the first chapter. Looks like Jim has met his match! Will the two humans ever get along? Who is Al's plus one? Until Next time!
R&R