Shattered Innocence (Polished)

by StolenMemes77

A polished and shortened version of an infamous story that nobody has been able to finish. Lincoln is locked out overnight during the events of No Such Luck and is murdered by a serial killer. The Louds then have to deal with the consequences of their actions, and Lincoln's untimely death. Rated T for the topic and lots of blood.

1. Introduction

Before you read this story, I'd like to say that I did what I felt I needed.

Lots of people try to continue a story that was already nine chapters in and clearly had a different vision than a lot of people. So of course, it messes with the writer when they try to finish something somebody was only half-way done with. That's why I decided to start my version at the structure. As sad as I am to say this, Chapters 3 and onward have been completely removed. And chapters 1 and 2 were mildly edited (more specifically polished to look better and to not be a giant wall of text), the only thing on my mind from those two chapters that I removed was the ending to chapter two, so I could change it and set up for chapter three, and a Leni joke that honestly shouldn't be in this story, seeing how this story is quite literally about the murder of an eleven year old boy. AustinDR is by no means a bad writer, but I don't think he should've added that in.

As for the original text, it's all saved somewhere, so that's not to worry about. The original nine chapters are still kind of floating around for whatever reason they need to be.

These three chapters aren't amazing, nor do I at all think they're my best work. But I think I did a good job with what I had and hope you all enjoy.