Ok so i'm making mixed up versions to my Twilight stories but then im going to tie it up into one big story so be patient
The day had finally came and i was ready. I had made this desision and i was ready to take on a new life. I was in Edwards room, well our room now, and I was sitting on the bed next to him still in my wedding gown and him still in his tux, but without the jacket. He looked into my eyes and said "Bella...are you ready?" i looked at his perfect breathtaking face, and said soft and confidentley then said "Yes...I am ready." Then he leaned his head down and softley brushed his lips against the bottom of my jaw then he whisperd "Now?" i whisperd "Now." Then i felt him slowley bite into my neak then a sharp pircing pain went thru my neak and i was restraining myself from screaming so i heald onto the edge of the bed in a tight grasp as the pain went shooting thru my veins then Edward leaned away and i started gasping and Edward quickley gatherd me up in his arms and laid me down on the bed and heald me tightley, to try and ease the pain, it did barley.I was still gasping in pain as the venom went thru my body and then when i coulden't take it anymore i screamed in pain and Edward heald be tighter to his chest and when i looked up i saw the agony in his eyes as he watched me gasp in the piercing pain. Edward kissed my forhead while still holding me as close as possible and then after a few more hours the pain eased and i fell numb...
Soo what do you think? o.o