Um... Hi.
Yeah, I know this is my first VOCALOID fanfiction, and criticisms are accepted. They could actually help me improve my writing skills!
Sorry for grammar errors and for the long intro. I just needed the readers to know my personality better. Sorry again!
Thanks,
MoonStar (Moon for short *wink*)
Prologue:
"So do you have a crush in school or not?"
"NO! what the hell makes you think that?!"
I groaned internally.
Oh wait! Stupid me, I forgot to introduce myself. My name's Victoria Devine, and the person annoying me right now is my cousin, Emerald Devine. She moved with us when she and I were little, when her parents abandoned her.
I think I should tell you more about myself.
I'm a 13 year-old girl, with shoulder length black 's about it really.
Have I told you that I'm in love with Vocaloid and my favorite/crush right now is Len Kagamine? I'm just addicted.
I squeal whenever I see him paired up with someone. I like Electric Angel, Magnet, World is Mine, Romeo and Cinderella, Servant of Evil (which made me cry big time) and some other japanese songs that I can't really read the titles of.
Oh, and back to reality: we were in the car after a trip, and we were bickering as usual.
"Come on Vic!"
"God, you two are so annoying! Keep it down, for heaven's sake!" My other cousin, Jet Devine, yelled.
We were quiet for the rest of the trip until it happened. The accident that would change my life forever.
Our car was colliding with another. All I saw after that were a blurr, and saw flashes of blue and white.
I got enfulged in the darkness.
I woke up with a jolt. Where the hell am I? I thought. I looked around. All white. Strange.
I got up and walked which seemed like hours. I gave up and sat on the floor with a thump. Strangest thing though, there was no floor.
A burst of light emerged from nowhere and I spun my head around. There I saw man with a white tux and long hair, around shoulder length.
"God?"
"Sometimes I wonder why people think of me as father." The man chuckled slightly.
"Wait, Jesus?"
"Yes." The ma- no wait, Jesus answered, then bowed.
"Am I..." I trailed of. He nodded.
"Why?" I asked, voice trembling.
"Calm yourself, my child. The Father knows what he is doing."
"I know..."
"I am sent here to tell you something. You have read The Time Keeper, yes?"
"Yeah..." (LOL for those who don't know time keeper, read it! Its by Mitch Albom. It was awesome.)
"Then you should know, I am sending you to your heaven."
"Where?"
"First, Let me explain. You wanted to be a Vocaloid yourself, right?"
"You don't mean..."
"That I'm going to reincarnate you and send you to be one of the Vocaloids? Yes."
I couldn't help it. I rushed over and hugged him tight. "ThankyouThankyouThankyou! I love you so much!"
"Yes, I know. They are making you right now. How about getting the chance to say goodbye to your family?" He said.
"Sure" I replied, my smile never leaving my face.
Yes!
Finally got to write this idea down. In case you haven't noticed, the OC I created? That was me. Or you could think of it as another OC though, I don't really care. Oh, and the name i mentioned were just fake names. I made them up.
I do not own Vocaloid as much as I want to, neither do I own The time keeper, in which this guy named Dor is sent out to chage the fates of 2 people. Oh, and I don't use God because I want to. He just kind of needed to be in the plot.
Anyway, my Vocaloid name would be...
SECRET!
Hahaha! but, please do leave me either a PM or a review. Hope you enjoyed!
