Glug, glug, glug, glug, went Tidlewave's, a Wortortle, watergun as it hit Flame, a Torchic, right smack dab in his face. "Stop, glug, it, glug." Flame was being drowned. "Awwww, whats the matter are you scared?" Tidlewave teased. "M-mabye." Flame said sadly. "Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, I knew it," Tidewave said."Now prepare to be defeted!"
"HEY, LEAVE HIM ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!" a voice shouted from a distance. Then a Combusken jumped from a bush and attacked Tidlewave. "FLAME, RUN!!!!!!!!" he yelled. Flame ran as fast as he could until he couldn't run any longer. Flame looked back, he could see smoke coming from the woods. Who was that guy, and why'd he save me? Flame thought.
Tap, tap. Flame swung arund so fast it was almost as if he didn't move at all. It was the Combusken.'Whew it's not Tidlewave.' Flame thought in releif. "Hey thanks." Flame said. "No problem, Flame." he said. "How'd you know my name was Flame?" Flame asked, "And whats your name?" "I've watched you for some time now, I know everything about you, and my name's Flare." he responded. "Wait, if your name's Flare then were kinda related, are you my brother?" Flame asked Flare. "Yes," Flare said. "I am"
"WOW," Flame yelled, "MY OWN BROTHER!!!!" "Sshhhhh!" Flare demanded "It'll hear you!" "What'll hear me?" Flame asked. "Deoxys." Flare said. "Who's he, and why shouldn't he hear me?." Flame asked. "Deoxys is the most powerfull Pokemon I've ever seen," Flare said. "I can't believe you've NEVER heard of him!" "Tell me how he became the most powerfull pokemon in the world, PLEASE?!" Flame asked. "Ok but first we have to find a safe place to camp for the night." Flare said. "Ok." Flame said. "Ok, come on I know the pefect place." said Flare.
"Welcome to my house." Flare said "It's a little messed up but still good enough to stay in for the night." A red and blue figure was staring down at them. "What is that?" Flame asked Flare. "That is Deoxys." Flare told Flame. "Hurry, we must get inside." So Flame followed Flare into the house and Flare stared up a fire. Deoxys wasn't very far from Flares house, only about 50 feet away. The good thing was that Flares house was practicly on a cliff and Deoxys was on the other side from where Flare's house was.
"I know you're here," Deoxys whispererd to himself. "You won't escape this time."
this is my first fanfic so R&R please