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Tris POV:

As my eyes flicker open all I can see is Tobias, my one true love, pacing back and forth in front of my window. I have no idea how long it has been since I swapped with my brother, but clearly enough time for them to find me and everything to settle down.

At least that is what I think before I hear Christina yelling at someone about god knows what.

"What do you mean I can't see him!?"

"He is too unstable to have visitors yet, I am sorry Christina you will just have to wait" the voice is unfamiliar to me but that does not stop me from trying to see her.

Tobias POV:

I can't stop pacing, they say it helps take my mind off the fact that Tris might not make it as the death serum was really strong and also it is hard for even a divergent like her to survive. It has been five terrible days since we filled David and we won the war also it has been five days since Tris swapped places with her idiot of a brother and she has shown no signs of waking up. God if she doesn't wake up I don't know how I am going to live without her, I love her too much for her to just leave me like this. Why did she have to swap places with her stupid brother? Why did she have to be divergent? Why did I have to be divergent? Why did this war have to start?

Christina still won't get over the fact that they won't let her see Will, no matter how many time we try to explain it to her. As she walks over to me I can see the anger I her eyes, it scares me although I think that is just because last time she looked that angry I woke up in the infirmary with a mild concussion.

"I can't believe it; they still won't let me see Will!" I just nod; I don't really know what to say as I am a little worried that what I want to say to her might get me another concussion.

"Don't worry Christina, they can't keep you out of there for ever" I finally work up the courage to tell her something and she looks a bit better to so it seems the crises is over but just when everything seems to get better I hear Tris scream!

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