I fixed this up a bit. Please tell me what you think. Chapter one will be up soon for those of you who cant wait. glares at Ebony Witch

Prologue

It was midnight and the dim street lights were the only source of light in Gotham City. Not a soul could be seen...except the lonely figure walking under the cover of the shadow.
A young teenage girl made her way down those empty streets. She turned into an alley, not flinching when the rats crawled over her feet.
"What's a girl like you doing out here all alone?" came a voice from the shadows. In a split second, the girl was surrounded by roughly a dozen boys. They laughed quietly while they advanced on her.
"You could get hurt, ya know," the first boy said, a mischievous grin played across his face. "Why don't I walk you home?" The boy slipped his hand around the girl's slim waist.
The rest of the boys were laughing when the girl's eyes began to glow blood-red and they could see her deathly pale skin. They started to back off, trying to escape the inevitable, but the fire that had so suddenly appeared all around them engulfed the boys and a hollow, evil laugh pierced the night as the girl watched the boys burn alive.