ok so we are clear, this is the chapter to get you confused on everything! i did this on purpose and you will see why in the future. plus, i do like to take critics! if you see something wronge tell me (like am i spelling Toshiros last name right?) it bugs me if i do something stupid and not notice! This may be one of the shorest chapters i am planning to write. Chapter 2 will be much longer and thats when things start to finally fall into place so if you like mystery and murder and kinda horror like stuff with a little bit of mushed up romance drama, then you will sure enough enjoy this story of our favorit Bleach characters as detectives in California!

I ran out of room in the summery so here is what i was really going to put...:

The "Chess Peice" murderer is on the move. He's taking people out pawn by little pawn. With no one else able to crack this major case, Toshiro and Momo have no choice but to take it. Everything seems to be goinf smoothly untill a blast from the past makes things harder to uncover. This man ruiened everything for Toshiro and he plans on taking his reveng.. But that will have to wait until after the 'King' is taken from his throne of terrony. Toshiro and Momo just about had this done when things staerted to change for the two. What will happen if things get a little 'personal' for the two? And, what will happen if something major changed their lives forever?

Ok, so lets get this shindig on the GO!

It was hot. Feeling it's warmth inside her mouth made her want to cry. Momo couldn't take it anymore. She swallowed the last mouthful of that hot liquid and cried out in pain. But she did it. Momo Hinamori won the hot sauce drinking contest!

Cheers erupted in the cafeteria as she gulped down a nice cold glass of milk to sooth the heat. What surprised people the most was who she beat. Rangiku Matsumoto has held the title for the Hot Sauce drinking contest for the last three years. Nobody has had the guts to challenge her until today. Plus thirty bucks were on the line!

But that's yesterday's news…

It's been years since that happened and Momo still holds that title! Now, she's attending collage with a part time job at Starbucks to pay off her student loan, tuition, and book fees.

Recently, the other girls who she works with have been drooling over a new regular who just randomly appeared in town one day. Every time he walked through the door, the girls would just stare, gawking at him like he was a priceless jewel. Momo on the other hand couldn't care less. She only wanted to get paid. She took his order, made it, and gave it to him. That's it.

Momo didn't care when he came in or when he left but the other girls sure did. They new when he would show up, what he would order, and when he would leave. Obsessed much?

One night, Momo worked the late shift and ended up having to close the store by herself. She was about to finish when she noticed that the regular was standing outside the door. Momo didn't mind this much. As long as he didn't touch her car, they would be on good terms. Just as she locked the door, she felt a cold steel touching her neck. He had a knife. At first, Momo wasn't all that scared, until he spoke to her.

"Open the door. When we are both inside, lock the door. Go behind the counter and stand there. You are under my control. Got it?" the man said in an almost lyrical voice.

Momo did as she was told. She figured he just wanted the money out of the safe. Wrong. He waltzed up behind her and pulled Momo's hair, causing her to yelp in pain.

With tinted windows, nobody would be able to see anyone inside the store. To make things worse, they were both behind the counter. Momo was forced to the ground by the man and he started to tear off her blouse. This was it. Momo was sure he would kill her if she didn't do what she was told. All she could do was prey that he didn't want her dead.

The man was about to get his way when a knock on the door cause him to jump. He told Momo not to make a sound while he took care of his interruption. She listened…

But he said nothing about moving.

Right as he was opposite of Momo over the counter, she jumped over and Rug bee tackled him to the ground. She pulled out a hidden gun and handcuffs and started to read him his rights.

Momo Hinamori, part-time job at Starbucks, full time detective in San Francisco.

Did I say she was a collage student? Sorry, that was five years ago.

Chapter one:

California, the state of fashion, surfing, beaches, and the occasional murder. Hey, a nice state doesn't necessarily mean that there was no crime. If anything, it's the states that seem the nicest that has the highest crime rate. You know that nice state down south called Texas? Maybe you should watch Americas Most Wanted more often.

San Francisco Metro Police Headquarters, one of the most busy police stations in the area. Also has one of the weirdest employee staff in its area, but they are also the most successful. It's not that they don't go by the book, they just find the loopholes. Plus, the captain was a little… Crazy.

Kisuke Uruhara was his name. He's a smart guy, makes stupid choices, and really… He's not the best leader to begin with. Constantly, hell beaks out in the work area. His lack of rules gave people the chance to do whatever the hell they wanted to do! Although, he did fire Kenpachi Zaraki for his harsh way of capturing his suspect (now he lives in an insane asylum and talks to an imaginary girl called Yachiru)

Sergeant Yoruichi Shihouen is somebody who takes he job seriously. Although, if you meet her after her hours, you would never guess what she job was. Let alone her position.

The lab junkies, Nemu and Kurosutchi, are the weirdest of them all. Nemu has a butter fetish (don' ask, don't tell policy) and Kurosutchi was constantly under surveillance for his crude ideas of experimenting on the prisoners.

But lets hurry things along.

Toshiro Hitsugaia is the other Sergeant on staff. Down to earth, normal-ish, all 'round best officer with a detectives badge you will ever meet. All his cases, but one, were all solved in almost record times. Only one case that he was on is still cold.

Momo Hinamori is who we met in the beginning of the start. She's just right behind Toshiro in the ranks. The only difference is that Momo has all her cases are solved. Caught all her culprits and the number one undercover agent they have.

Now, lets get this party rollin'!

… I didn't say that…