Hello everybody. This is my first fanfic soplease do nat be too harsh with your comments, but flames are allowed. This is my first chapter and also my shortest, it is actually more of an intro than anything.
Here's my story.
Darkness. All he could see was darkness. He tried to call out, but nothing happened. He tried again, but still nothing happened. He also tried to move, but he couldn't do that either. He was all alone. Suddenly, he could see a faint light. It almost seemed to be beckoning him. Again he tried to move, and to his gratification, he began moving toward the light. As he got closer, the brightness intensified, but even with the intensified light, he could make out the faint outline of a person. When he could go as far as he could without blinding himself, he called out, grateful that his voice had returned also.
"Who are you?" he called out.
The person didn't reply; instead, the person just kept repeating his name, "Naruto… Naruto… Naruto…". Right when that person started talking, Naruto could tell that the person was female. She also had the most beautiful and angelic voices he ever heard; although, it sounded vaguely familiar. She suddenly stopped talking (To Naruto's disappointment) and began walking towards him. Naruto had to close his eyes or risk becoming blind. Suddenly, he felt the girl clasp his hand and said his name one more time; except, this time, her voice seemed to almost be pleading or begging. That was the last thing he heard before everything went black. Naruto tried calling to her, telling her to come back. His cries turned into yells and became more frantic. He woke with a start to find his dad, the Yodaime, at his bedside with a worried expression on his face.
"Oh good, your awake," Arashi (The Yodaime) said, "I was beginning to get worried, you kept calling out in your sleep for someone and began thrashing around".
"What time is it?" Naruto asked.
"It's one in the morning," Arashi replied, "But getting back to the matter at hand, are you okay?".
"Yeah," replied Naruto exasperated, "I'm probably just nervous about the exam today."
"Oh, that's right, You have your genin exam today," inquired Arshi while stroking his chin, "Well if that's the case, you have got nothing to worry about, for you are the son of the greatest hokage ever!!!"
"Da~~d," Naruto droned. Naruto knew his dad was just kidding around, but sometimes it just got annoying.
"I know, I know, but you have got to have faith in yourself," the Yodaime said taking that fatherly tone to his voice, "After all, you were trained by Jariya…"
"You mean Ero-sennin," Naruto cutting in.
"Yeah, but if you do manage to fail, I promise I will beat the stuffings out of him for you."
"Thanks dad," Naruto replied happily while getting himself comfortable again.
"Goodnight," said Arashi, but Naruto had already drifted into a long dreamless sleep.