Sup guys, this is my first time trying to make sense out of a horrible fanfiction.. Well, let's give this a shot!
"Wake up, Starkit..." A Tortoiseshell queen mewed gently, inside the nursery. She nudged a young kit with a forepaw. her kit looked up at her mother, half asleep, before letting a mewl of complaint and burying her face into the bedding, still exhausted. Jayfeather poked his head in. "Is she ok?" He questioned. "Yes, Jayfeather. There hasn't been anything unusual going on so far yet.." He sighed.
"I've never seen a kit hallucinate like this before... Remind me why she is like this again?" Jayfeather mewed.
"Like I told you... I was a kittypet once. The twoleg was clumsy, so when it picked her up, it dropped her and poor Starkit landed on her head..."
"That's a shame... That is why you left?"
"Yes..."
Starkit still continued to mutter in complaint, still tired.
Dawnsparkle continued to nudge her kit, while Jayfeather let out an exasperated sigh. "Pick things up, already..." He muttered.
"Today is an important day." Dawnsparkle whispered in Starkit's ear. "What is it, mom-" The young feline groaned, before instantly cutting short. "OH MY GOSH! IT'S MY CEREMONY TODAY!" She exclaimed loudly. The younger kits let out a mewl of complaint, and some of the oldest, glared at Starkit. She has always been an oddball. Starkit burst into the opening quickly, filled with adrenaline. Firestar was already summoning the clan on the highrock. Starkit rushed towards the meeting, but found her mom blocking her tracks with her tail. "Er- Sweetie, I hope you know that some cats aren't... Well, cut out for being a warrior. Maybe you could stay out of trouble and danger... Jayfeather thinks you should go to the elder's den early, or maybe just take an apprenticeship late-" Dawnsparkle cut off after she caught Starkit's angry glare. "Did she just hallucinate again?" She thought. Firestar was already prepared for Starkit. "Smallkit, step forward." He commanded gently. Starkit didn't respond. "Smallkit, come here." He repeated. There was an awkward silence. Firestar let out a sigh. "STARkit, come here." He meowed. The young kit jumped up instantly to his call and trotted up the highrock excitedly. The clan listened intently. Who was going to apprentice this kit? The poor kit whom often has hallucinations? "Starkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is about time for you to become apprenticed." He announced. "From this day forward, you will be known as Starpaw. Your mentor will be..." Firestar knew nobody wanted to apprentice this kit. "Me." Lots of people gasped. Firestar licked her shoulder affectionately before meowing, "You'll get through your problem, Small-Starkit, I know it. I'll make you the greatest warrior there ever was in clan history."
Heh heh, explains things, doesn't it? Please leave a review, gives me motivation! :D