I think this poem would suit Bella's feelings when she was considering 'cliff diving' in New Moon.
I wrote it during a really depressing time in my life, so it reflects more of Bella's more negative and 'zombie-like' emotions. I would like reviews on the actual poem; and not just if or how it suits New Moon.
Unknown
What is keeping me alive?
What is keeping me from jumping off a cliff?
This cliff that is before me
Always in my second eye
Always in my mind
The crashing waves are calling
Constantly calling my name
Drawing me towards them
Closer, closer
Until I almost fall.
Then suddenly,
I wake from my sleep
Finding I am at the edge
Somehow I knew already
And wanted it.
Waves are crashing on the rocks,
My heart is pounding in my chest
A million beats a minute
The waves and my heart are in rhythm
That I have made totally my own
Should I jump of the cliff?
Would anyone miss me if I did?
That is what keeps me teetering on the edge…
The question of the unknown.
Thanks for reading.
(p.s. a great song that suits Bella after Edward left in New Moon is Need by Hana Pestle)