well hi again guys

its only the first night ive released this and thanks to akatsukifeathers i noticed my mistakes and went back and changed it .3.

so i hope this version is better :)

enjoy,

disclaimer: Pip and other south park character i use in this story belong to matt and trey,all i own is the storyline ;)

Hi there.

my names Phillip Pirrup.....but you may call me Pip

I suppose you could say i'm a fairly normal boy,

well.....except for the fact that im a vampire..

I know it came as a jolly shock to me too,

well i suppose you will want to know what happened.

It all started when i was a young chap,only about eight years old.

One day a strange man brought me home during a particuly cold night and told my sister (who was looking after me at the time) that i had been attacked,before he left he told my sister that if at anytime in the future shall i be overcome by a strange and indescribable illness that she shall have to take me to a certain man;a man in an american town south park.

And that leads us up to this paticular point in time, nine years later,just a month after my sevententh birthday,when my sister and i have travelled for hours across the seas to see that very doctor...

I sat in the waiting room, staring at the dust that fell lazily in the light, as I waited for my sister and the doctor. I seemed to have become strangely ill. I had sudden, painful fevers when I stepped outside and for some unexplainable reason I seemed to always be thirsty...no matter how much water i drink my thirst is never 've been to all the doctors and they know nothing about such an illness,so my sister and i decided that maybe the stranger that night was right and that we should see this certain man...so here I am,waiting.

finaly an eternity later,well only an hour really,the doctor comes out of his office,for some reason with a sad and woeful face,I cant imagine for the life of me why,he slowly approaches and tells me in a dry coarse voice that im 'going to have to go to this sucluded academy up in the moantains,and that everything will be explained to me there.'

well im now dreadfully confused,even more so than before.

so here I am, a small tatty brown and blue duffle bad filled with my clothes and belongings,and also my favorite a collection of fairy tales and adventures, sister peggy always told me it was for toddlers and young girls but I dont mind I love it anyway.

Standing infront of a giant wrought iron gate that protects a grey,moss and ivy covered, mansion like building,I do say if there was lightning in the background this would be an even bigger clich'e than it already is.

im greeted by a wirey old man with grey whispy hair that is gelled back on his head,he says to call him mr pocket,"right-o sir" i reply cheerfully he mearly replies with a grunt.

I slowly follow him up a grand marble staircase that leads to a giant set of red oak double doors with two old looking trees ingraved into them,he knocks on the door five times,tells me to stay there, and then walks around the corner past some rather expensive looking vasesif i might say,I hear a muffled "enter" come from inside,i slowly,shakily,reach for the door handle and take a step into the room.

well was that an better? i tried my best to look for the mistakes v3v

hope it was a,even if only,a tiny bit better :D