Ok so this is my new story!! Well actually first story but whatever!!You get me point!
Flames are welcome so please message me I don't care if your saying I hate it or I love it!! But I need some type of feedabck!
Alright well here we go.

"Bella!" I shouted running towards her but tripping over my robe, sending my hat thigny flying off."Woopss"
"Smart Bri!" she giggled crushing her freaking rock hard body into me.

"I can't breathe!!" She laughed nervously and stepped back. That's when I noticed her golden eye's. Where in the world did she get those.
"How do you have gold eye's"
"Contacts.."she muttered dryly rolling her eye's in the process.

"Well atleast their not black...that would be freaky!" WE both started laughing as we walked away from the huge crowd of people laughing, crying, screaming, and lots of other weird things. Bella and I on the other hand had things to do and people to see...not really.
We were just two girls going to have fun celebrating my graduation from Highschool.
"So were we going sis"
"Well...I was thinking that me and you could go on a cruise or something"
"And how will we afford this? With you go to college and all that?"

"Hello! Do you not remember I was engaged at one point Bri but broke it off for..many...reasons"
"I liked him he was nice!" She growled slightly and rolled her eye's..again!
"Fine...when does the cruise leave"
"Well tommorow..." I cussed in my head loudly and stopped dead in my tracks.
"TOMMOROW!! HOW IN THE FREAKING WORLD AM I GONNA BE PACKED BY THEN"
"Hello! Your talking about me here! I already packed for you dim wit!" she shouted back smacking me in the back of the head.
Bella and I are such great sisters..we love eachother at one minute then can't stand eachother the next!
"Fine..."I muttered walking towards the car again."Is it just gonna be you and me or...?"

"No...ofcourse not! Alice and Rose will be there too"
"Forgot...can't have on triplet without the other two!"I giggled thinking about how they look nothing alike...yet are the best of friends and people get them confused somehow? Don't know how they do that..but whatev.
"Holy shit Bri watch out!!" Bella screamed trying to move me out of the way of the speeding car. I closed my eye's bracing for impact. And oh hell did it come! I felt like a bus was slamming into my sides.
Crushing every bone on my left side...well technicly it wasn't a bus it was a crummy old BMW but same difference! I fell to the ground with such a force that I felt both of my knees shatter. Immediatly Bella's cold hands were shaking my shoulders...and it hurt like hell.
"Shit..shit ..shit!" she kept muttering shaking my shoulders harder.
"Dammit...Be..la...stop..."I wheezed out coughing up blood. She immedialy stiffened. My eye's rolled back into my head as I lost consisous.

I woke up to the sounds of hushed voices.

"Dammit Alice I have to see Carlisle NOW!" Bella's REALLY loud voice shrieked throughout the room causing me to wimper! Immediatly her cold hand was on my fore head."OMG Bri are you awak I'm so sorry"
"It'scough fine...atleast I'm dieing with a story!" I whispered trying to raise my arm but the pain was too intense.
"Hello No...You are not dieing! No way...I will NOT let that happen!" She screamed causing my ears to hurt...REALLY Bad!
"Shit Bella your gonna burst my ear drums!" I screached.
"Alice...can...can anyone..."Bella whispered. I strained my ears to listne to what Alice was saying.

"Edward's the only one with that much self control.." Self control? What the hell?
Bella took a deep breathe and I couldn't make out what she was saying. The next thing I knew was I was being carried out of the room, and my could barely breathe.
She set me down on something soft and I tried to look around but relized I was strapped down...weird.
"I don't fucking care what you think Edward she's my sister and I am NOT letting her die! So either you bite her NOW or I will seriously kick your ass until you do!" I heard Bella hiss from where I was currently tied down!
I actualy started laughing! Ya luahing it hurt but I couldn't help it! Bella isn't one to cuss! It was HILARIOUS! I quickly hushed myslef though as I heard her stop hissing or talking..whatever it was!
"Fine...but I don't want you around.."this weird velvety voice said..hehe velvet..How can a voice be that velvet? Whatever! Wow I've been saying that alot lately! Funny!

I felt something sharp pierce my skin in my arm then neck, then other arm, and other arm! Holy crap! I felt like I was on fire and couldn't help screaming.
"I'm sorry love...but you'll feel better later," the mysterious voice whispered in my ear. And why did he call me love? Alittle weird! AHH crap I'm on freakin fire! SHIT! I felt another sharp thing go into my skin but the burning sensation that I thought was coming was replaced by a cooling. Well this is different!
"Did that help?" I nodded my head not trusting myself to speak. I felt the cool skin leave mine and I whimpered.
"Do you want me to stay"
"Yes..."I whispered hoarsly."But first what's your name"
"Edward"
"I had a dog named Edward...Holy shit! Am I on fire Edward?" he chuckled darkly.
"No love..your not on fire"

Did you like it? If you didn't I don't care tell me anyway! I'll have the next one out soon!!