Character profile:

Name: Mokiki Sumari

Age: 14 in the first part 16 in the second part

Rank: Genin in the first part Chunin in the second part

Description: Mokiki likes to bring smiles to everyone's faces. She is described to have long dark brown hair, and dark blue eyes. She is fun to be around, but can get as annoying as Naruto, which can get her in trouble at times.

Disclaimer: We do NOT own Naruto anyway possible. This OC was created by tsuirakukahen.

This story is a collaboration with darkshadowsofthestars.

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Mokiki is from a family of five. It was her mother and father, two older twin brothers and herself the youngest. Her father and brothers live in different village, the village hidden in the mist. Her and her mother live in the village hidden in the leaf. Since her mother was also a Shinobi she didn't get to see much of her, only once in awhile. She doesn't know the reason why her father and brothers live in a different village and she's never really seen them she's been only told stories from her mother. She knows she doesn't look like her mother, she just figure that she looks like her father. No matter what she would protect her family. Mokiki entered the academy at age nine. She had one goal in mind, its that she could be a good shinobi. She finished the academy at age fourteen. She was off with her two new team mates and a new sensei. She couldn't wait to meet them. She had woken up late and she knew she was going to get scolded. She was told to meet at the Ichiramen. When she got there she notice two boys and a lady sensei. She figured that was them.

"Ah, nice of you to join us young lady." said her sensei

"Now, with everyone here let's introduce each other. I'm Akira." so her name was Akira.

The boy next to her was next. He was kinda dorky looking, but Mokiki knew he would be smart. He had short brown hair, with dark green eyes. She liked his eyes there were a rare color.

"My name is Zeke Lotsuma."

"Okay Zeke, why don't you tell us something about yourself."

"Well I want to train to become medical shinobi."

"Very good. We could always use medical shinobi." said Akira.

"okay next" she went on.

"I'm Nikko Samia, and I just want to be a good shinobi to make my parent's proud of me." Akira smiled at him.

"Always good to make your folks proud of you."

"Okay next."

"Well I'm Mokiki Sumari, and I just want to be a good konouchi for myself."

"No one special you want to make proud." she asked.

"Well my family but I don't ever see them so I figure I become a shinobi I could protect them."

"That's a good point." said Akira. "okay now that we have introduce our selves we are now squad twelve. You are dismissed until tomorrow."

"What? But I want to start learning to fight now." yelled Mokiki, Zeke and Nikko just gave her a annoyed look. They both thought she was so annoying just like Naruto.

"We start tomorrow Mokiki, be patient. You are dismissed."

Mokiki said goodbye and left to find Neji. She liked Neji a lot and his cousin Hinata was her best friend. She also knew she likes Naruto, but Naruto likes Sakura, and Sakura likes Sasuke. Mokiki wished she was placed on the same team as Hinata and Neji, but she knew that wouldn't happen. They can't place two Bykuaguns on the same team, besides Neji's team was a year older then her. She visited the Huga clan all the time. She was their regular guest. The main reason was for Hinata but she would be lying if she didn't go looking for Neji. She knew he would never return her feelings, she was just happy to be in his presences. After she and Hinata did some training she said good bye and went home. She open her bedroom door. She was in the house alone again. She really didn't mind anymore, she was use to it. The next morning she hears a commotion she went over there and saw Neji and Naruto over there. There was a huge crowd of geneni circling around them.

"Get over self Naruto. Talking about being the next Hokage. it's never going to happen you're just a knuckle headed fool."

She was kinda mad at Neji for saying that at Naruto. She respected Naruto for having such a dream.

"Well, at least I'm not some super genius who thinks I know everything."

Shikamaru tried to break it up. But he just gave up like always.

"Shut up Naruto, stop making fun of Neji, it's not his fault he's smarter than you." Mokiki hits him in the head and he falls to the ground.

"Why don't you get him for calling me a knuckle headed fool."

"Because he's right, you are acting like a child. Grow up Naruto."

"I'm not foolish for dreaming." he said.

"I never said that you idiot. The way your acting, picking fights is what makes you foolish." she said to him.

He got quiet, some sensei's came to break the crowd up told them to go where they were suppose to go.

Mokiki met up with Zeke, and Nikko. They went to the training grounds together to meet Akira sensei. She started with running exercises. They were really tired by the end of the day and Mokiki was annoying everybody complaining about that, she wanted to learn real techniques, not how to run.

"Patience Mokiki is the secret to winning sometimes. Besides everything has running in it the more you run the faster you are."

"Hm I guess you're right but I want to learn how to use some really cool moves."

Even Zeke and Nikko agreed with her they just want to get out there to the real world, not training. Akira sighed and told them they will get their first mission soon enough.

"You guys can go for today we'll do something different tomorrow." said their sensei.

It's probably something that's not very fun thought Mokiki. The others thought that too. Mokiki grab her stuff and headed off to find something else to do. She invited Zeke and Nikko but they declined. Mokiki ran into Naruto.

"Oh Naruto, I wanted to ask you what type of training are you doing with your sensei?"

"um fighting training duh." sometimes Mokiki just wanted to hit him.

"Well I know that, what I mean is he giving you running exercise?"

"No we just got finish with teamwork and boy I tell ya it is hard work."

"teamwork huh?"

"Yep can you imagine working with Sasuke is a pain in the butt."

"He probably thought that of you." she replied back.

He just frowned at her, and she laughed at him. She said goodbye to him and went to find Hinata. Mokiki like the element water. She wish to specialize in it. To do Justus with it. She walked until she bump right into Neji.

"Oh, I'm sorry I wasn't watching where I was going." she bowed her head to him.

"It's alright next time just watch where you are going." he started to walk off.

"Uh Neji."

"Yeah."

"Um have you seen Hinata?"

"She just left to find you."

"Oh okay, thanks." She ran off to find Hinata.


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