So, to give you a little summary:
This is basically the story of Code Geass as it appears in the Anime, but the two seasons are compressed into one. The Knights of the Round appear from the start and Spinzaku does not take part in it. Also V.V. is not a little boy, but you'll see that a bit later. The characters that appear have a role based on the idea above. So does Rolo appear, but not as Lelouchs pretend-to-be little brother as Lelouch was never dragged before the Emperor (whose Geass is different here) but as an assassin sent out by V.V. to kill Zero directly. The development is mainly decided by polls as I do not have an idea for the end by now. Normally these things come as I write, but I want to let my readers decide.
However I'll include some Nightmare of Nunnally-characters, which was basically a great source of ideas. Everyone who intends to write serious CG-Fanfics should read this.
I tell you before, the start's gonna SUCK as it is just a summary showing you what's wrong here, but if you read on a bit(after the trash that happens in the first three episodes mainly) you'll get a little present. It gets better, I promise. I have some seriously good ideas! As I still do not know a title for this, I'll just call it Lelouch of the Eden Vital.
Before I forget it the legal shit:
I neither own Code Geass nor its characters nor do I tend to make profit with it. I just want to entertain those who are reading this.
Awakening in Shinjuku
Lelouch went across the street, boring and reading. He always seemed rather bored, but now it was quite extreme. He just had a chess game against a nobleman. Far, far too easy. And he arrived late to make it harder even…
The guy was no fitting opponent. Not a fitting one for Lelouch at least. His intellect was far greater than that of normal people so there was no fitting opponent for him. No more. Once there was even one he could never beat. His big brother. Prince Schneizel. But that man believed Lelouch to be dead. Maybe for the better…
While thinking back to these times he stepped over a borderline which was said to do not exist. The borderline between the Tokyo Settlement and the Elevens Ghetto of Shinjuku.
He sighed, knowing that, although he had no grudge against the Elevens, they still hated him for being a britannian student.
I'd really like to tell them the name of my best friend. Maybe they'd accept me afterwards.
Suddenly something woke the interest of the prince.
A crash. A truck had just crashed into a building.
Someone had to help, but the people were only longing for sensations so they were just starring.
Lelouch however was sick and tired of this. He ran down the bridge, jumped into the truck and before he could ask whether everyone was alright the truck started moving again.
Damn. I can't get out of a driving truck… Wait. What's this?
Disbelievingly he starred at a capsule inside the truck.
Is this… a bomb?! Are they… terrorists?! Damn!
Surrender at once. Surrender and you'll get a chance to defend yourself in court.
Oh no! The military? Why is this happening to me of all persons?!
This is your last warning. Surrender at once or we will shoot.
Unimpressed the driver accelerated while a woman came from the cab in the back, changing her clothes on the way.
Lelouch hid himself.
"Hey Kallen, let's use it right here, why not?"
"Because that would mean a blood bath."
"Yeah, you're right."
She went past the capsule into a corner, where a… Knightmare stood?! Did she intend to fight the military?!
As the first salvo hit the truck the Knightmare jumped out the car and instantly the helicopters crashed by means of her harkens.
Closely after she even destroyed two enemy Sutherlands.
The third one however thought loudly.
"An eleven piloting a Knightmare? Great. Stay and face Jeremiah Gottwald!"
But she flew, knowing that she had to defend the truck.
The driver flew into a tunnel of which he thought it was too small for Knightmares.
Some soldiers were sent in and soon after one salvo from a machine gun hit a tire and made the truck crash.
The capsule was exposed, as well as a much panicked Lelouch.
"So a britannian student was the terrorist? What a shame."
The heavily injured driver could not do anything but he had to.
"Nippon Banzai!" he cried out before opening the capsule from the driver's seat.
A soldier jumped to his sergeant and pressed his gas mask on his face.
But there was no poison gas. It was… a girl?! A girl with hip-long green hair and wearing a straightjacket.
"What the…? Ah, leave the girl to the OSI. Shoot the terrorist."
One of the soldiers took aim and as he fired Lelouch cried out his sister's name.
"Nunnally!!!"
But it was not supposed to end here as the girl took the bullet for him, shouting out:
"He mustn't die!" She got the bullet in her heart and fell over, whimpering:
"Le-Lelouch…"
"Ah, damn it. Now shoot the boy. We simply say he tortured her to death."
How can this be happening? For this girl is killed. She tried to save me and still… Now I'm about to die… before I had a chance to do a single thing with my life… It's gone in a heartbeat… Nunnally…
You don't want it to end here, do you?
What?
You appear to have a reason for living.
The girl? That's impossible…
If I grant you power, could you go on? I propose a deal. In exchange for this power you must agree to make my one wish come true. Accept this contract and you accept its conditions. While living in a world of humans you will live unlike any other. A different providence, a different time, a different live. The power of the king will condemn you to a live of solitude. Are you prepared for this?
'The conversions for the Ragnarok Connection? So the myth is beginning once again?'
He heard his father say. Burning in the anger of seeing this man, the emperor of the Holy Britannian Empire Lelouch stood up.
Yes. I hereby accept the terms of your contract.
"What's wrong? Why not shoot? Your opponent is just a school boy. Or have you finally realized? The only ones who should kill are those who are prepared to be killed.
I, Lelouch vi Britannia command you, now all of you, DIE!"
Only seconds later the sergeant and the others took up their weapons and held them in direction of their heads.
"Happily, your Highness."
Only a minute after Lelouch realized what he just did a Knightmare rushed into the tunnel. So it was not too small after all…
"What happened here?!"
"I order you to come out." The prince ordered.
"Who are you to give me orders?!"
I see. It only works with eye contact…
"My name is Andreas Fitzgerald. My father is a duke. You can check my ID-Card. After you do, I request safe escort."
Nobility, huh?
"Fine. Hands up."
"Yes." Lelouch waited until she came out to gently smile at her before he said:
"Well then, give me your Knightmare."
The woman from the Sutherland took her pistol away before she said:
"Catch" while throwing the USB-Stick-like key in his direction.
"Thank you."
What bizarre of a power… Well then…
Hehehe, exactly 999 words on this one^^
This is mainly a review of the first episode. The beginning SUCKS either way, it's just to tell you what's different. As you can see, here's no Spinzaku. However I promise that it gets better.
I don't think there's something in here but:
The credit for making Marianne a peeping perv and for some of the parts in this goes to Sierra-de-Lafayette.
If you want to know where I stole read her Fanfic. I'd greatly recommend that either way.^^
