Hey. I really hope you enjoy this, it's my first Fanfic. It is based off of Naruto and contains a decent amount of oc usage. The story is written kind of like a screenplay, too. However, there is an excessive amount of language and violence. Just enjoy and PLEASE review, just no "Simon Coweling!" Also, this story takes place 9 years after the nine tailed fox {kitsun} was sealed into Naruto.

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Prologue:

Kai zukeiyota was 14 and was an average chunin of the village hidden in the Thunder in the land of metal which is an uncharted island covered in a storm so that no one may enter. One day sound ninja assassins that were once thunder ninja infiltrated the land of fire and killed many. With the rogues captured, leaf ninja were tricked by the rogues' headbands because they had the thunder insignia so then the leaf ninja demanded the location of the thunder village. Then the rogues led them to the village and they got past the storm with a mysterious summoning jutsu. So then the leaf village teamed up to attack the thunder village (so basically, the thunder ninja were framed)

Chapter 1: survivors

Kai stood with his master in the training field trying to master a kekei genkai called thunder bomb jutsu which was similar to chidori (only explosive)

Hokoro: "alright, buildup chakara in the palm of your hand…

And don't blow yourself up!"

Kai: "you'll forget, this is my family's jutsu and on top of that, I'm a chunin and I'm only 14!"

Kai builds up chakara and gets to the stage where he has lightning in the palm of his hand, but then…..BOOM! WThis interrupts kai's training.

Person: "ahhh!"

Kai: "wait, what's that?"

Suddenly leaf and sand ninja tried to struggle through the thunder village gate and then a ninja appears before kai and hokoro.

Zaikai: "KAI!"

Kai: "WAT!"

Zaikai: "sorry, your pa' is dead. Now hurry! We gotta go to the family head."

Kai: "…"

Zaikai: "kai? You okay kai?"

Kai: "why even bother, the clan is probably dead."

Zaikai: "kai, once I was fleeing out of the clan's main house I saw clan members hiding in supply closets."

Kai: "okay, but what is going on?"

Zaikai (dramatically): "betrayal, invasion, now come on!"

Hokoro: "I'm just going to…"

Just then, kunai charged out and stabbed Hokoro in the back, blood oozing from his mortal wound.

Kai: "SENSEI!"

Just then, sand ninja popped out of the direction the kunai knifes were thrown.

Sand ninja 1: "these two are probably genin."

Kai: "GENIN! Take this!"

Kai pulled out a kunai and held it firmly in his left hand. The sand ninja did the same. The two ninja clashed, with each kunai stabbing into the other. Then kai pulled out another kunai, thrusting it into the sand ninja, his bones cracking and blood spilling out, dying the grass a deep red. While zaikai was weaving hand signs at the one who attacked him. Just then, zaikai had a lightning like whip in the palm of his hand. Then zaikai lunged at the sand ninja, constricting him, his neck twisting around unnaturally, bones erupting from his chest, blood whisking through the air splattering zaikai in a thick mist. The sand ninja was left on the ground, to torn up to even be considered human, but still clinging to his hopeless life, which was then snuffed out like a candle as zaikai slammed his boot through the man's skull, the mass of bones cracking into to many pieces, blood flowing from the wound, and zaikai had a face of apathy the entire time.

Zaikai: "let's go."

While battling their way through sand ninja, kai and zaikai went to the head house only to find the entire household lying in unruly piles, all of them dead. The bodies were all beyond recognition, they were coated with dirt and blood, their final moments captured on the remnants of their faces, the horror they've been through would have been to much to take, some of their faces were peeled of their skin, leaving a meaty flesh to bleed on to the bodies of the others. Legs were torn off; bones cracked and mutilated, and were tossed aside like trash.

Kai: "no, we were too late…"

Zaikai: "kai, there could still be survivors."

Kai: "Ya, possibly, maybe they hid in the emergency supply rooms."

Zaikai; "wow, you really think so?"

Kai: "I don't know, why are you asking me these questions?"

Zaikai: "…."

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