This is my attempt at a Bleach story. Please give a critique. Need Help (obviously).
I have found so many ways that what Shinji Hirako's group is translated that I will be
calling them he Visoreds (plural)
and Vizard (singular).
Inner hollow Ichigo's name is- ikasoruK ogihcI
"We are all
Born dead.
The end exists
Before anything begins.
If living
Is a constant quest for awareness,
The awareness we gain at the end is the real goal.
In other words, death
Is the discovery and complete understanding
Of the end.
We are not permitted to seek awareness.
Those that cannot transcend death
Will not find awareness in anything."
ikasoruK ogihcI
In a state of homeostasis Aizen smiles at his perfect plan. He slicks his hair back and walks towards
Ulquiorra "I need you to go to the World of the Living. I need you to get rid of a group of soul reapers
called the Visoreds. Exterminate them on sight, and be thorough." Again he slicks back his hair, this time
he talks to Ichigo, "You will go with him. After all its been a while since you've been home, you don't
want anyone getting worried about you... Ichigo..." After that is said and done he walks around a
wall to see why it is that Gin Ichimaru is eavesdropping.
[WORLD OF THE LIVING]
The atmosphere is dirtier, dust covered, polluted, the Sun is hidden behind dark nimbus clouds. The
ground is wet and muddy anybody who walks today would surly get stuck, not to mention
unimaginably dirty. The two strangers embark on their mission to find and kill the Visoreds
"Hey, Ulquiorra, why do follow Aizen's orders with such complexity?" asks Ichigo with a somewhat
confusing question.
"Garbage, that's all he is. That's all he'll ever be. He is not a real hollow, he got his hollow powers
by being created by Kisuke Urahara in order to stop Rukia Kuchiki's execution," Thinks Ulquiorra
as Ichigo asked the question. "Because, if one does not follow their orders precisely, then one
will fail the objective at hand." After the remarks are given they split up in order to cover more
ground, and because Ichigo didn't want to be around his depressing attitude.
around now i'm going to wrap up this chapter because i need to see what people think of it first.