Hello. This is my first AATC story. I hope that it meets the expectation that other AATC stories meet. Please review so that I know how to make it better. Enjoy!
What Happened?
"I'm bored," groaned a certain five inch chipmunk in a red hoodie adorned with a yellow "A". He was draped across the couch "dying" from boredom.
"Alvin, we've only been out of school one day. You can't expect summer vacation to get exciting within 24 hours," his smarter, taller…bluer brother, Simon, said getting annoyed by Alvin's complaining.
"Well, excuse me for thinking otherwise," he dramatically said as he rolled off the couch and hit his head. Simon just laughed at this as Alvin glared at him while rubbing his head. As much as Simon wanted to prove Alvin wrong, he couldn't. The chipmunks and chipettes just sat there bored out of their minds. There was literally nothing to do. School's out and there's a terrible storm raging outside. He sighed and helped his brother up.
"Why don't we play a game?" gestured their shorter, green hoodie wearing younger brother as he came out of the kitchen. Upon hearing this, Alvin's ears perked up and a wide grin spread across his face.
"Alvin, what are you up to?" Brittany asked as she knew that face meant trouble. She was still massively in love with him and was willing to do anything with him, but she still worried about her own well-being.
"Oh nothing, I just thought of a game we could play," he explained while making his towards the Xbox 360. Everyone groaned as they knew what that meant: Naruto Tournament.
"Come on, Alvin, you know none of us could beat you at that game," Eleanor told him.
"Yeah, and not only that, we can't even come close to beating you," Jeanette added. All of this was true. In the house, Alvin was undefeated when it came to Naruto.
"Come on guys, it's only a little friendly competition," he reassured them as he pulled up the main menu for the game.
"It's not friendly when you're playing," Theodore mumbled as he grabbed his controller. They each picked their character they felt the most comfortable using:
Alvin-Naruto
Brittany-Sakura
Simon-Shikamaru
Jeanette-Hinata
Theodore-Choji
Eleanor-Tenten
Now, the tournament raged on with Alvin and Brittany in the final round. In the middle of their fight, a violent bolt of lightning struck the TV antenna. The entire house blacked out.
"Hey, I was about to win!" Alvin shouted as he threw his controller to the floor. Before Brittany could say anything, a swirling vortex appeared on the TV screen and it began to drag the chipmunks into it.
"Umm, Simon, what's going on?" Theodore fearfully questioned grabbing whatever he could to prevent getting closer to the vortex.
"Judging by it, it looks like a wormhole, designed to warp time and space to send whatever gets sucked in into an alternate dimension-"
"IN ENGLISH!" Alvin and Brittany interrupted.
"If we get sucked in, we'll be sent somewhere else," Jeanette said. All 6 of them tried their hardest to keep from getting sucked in but to force was just too great for them. In bright flash of light, the chipmunks and chipettes were gone.
"Ugh, what happened," Alvin said as woke up and rubbed his head. He looked around and saw that his family was safe and was merely sleeping. He smiled at this sight but it disappeared as soon as he realized what he saw. They wore all in some sort of forest. But what really shocked him was what his family was wearing.
Brittany was in a magenta colored qipao dress with white circular designs, with a zipper, tight dark green shorts, and a forehead protector. Simon wore a green lined mesh T-shirt under a short sleeved grey jacket with green edges, adorned on both the sleeves and the back with a circle with a line through it, his blue forehead protector worn around his left arm, brown pants, and blue sandals. Jeanette wore a cream-colored hooded-jacket with a fire symbol on the upper right and left sleeves and fur around the cuffs and hem, with navy blue pants and a forehead protector around her neck. Theodore was dressed in brown shorts, a long white scarf, a short-sleeved green jacket over a white shirt with his the kanji for "food" on it, small, hoop earrings, and his legs and forearms were wrapped in bandages. His forehead protector was also worn like bandanna around his head with tufts of his hair sticking out. Finally, Eleanor was adorned in a pink sleeveless blouse and dark green pants. Chinese-style buns are on both sides of her head. Her forehead protector is worn around her head underneath her fringe.
Alvin quickly ran to the river near them to see his reflection. He wore an orange tracksuit with blue on the upper shoulders area as well as around the waist, a white swirl with a tassel on the left side, a red swirl on the back, a large white collar, orange pants, blue sandals, and a blue forehead protector.
"What happened to us?" he shouted to the sky.
Hope you enjoyed the first chapter. I'll try to update it ASAP. See ya!
