Author's notes: Hi so this is my first fanfic and I would love to have some feedback on how to make this better. Also I'm not the best at English but I will try my best. Plus i am Australian and we love to swear so be prepared for colorful language. Also i would like to thank chazonic as i have gotten a lot of my ideas off of his fanfic Undertale: Dissonant Darkness. here is a link to chapter one if you want to read it
s/11748314/1/Undertale-Dissonant-Darkness. Also if you haven't played or watched the actual game then.
MASSIVE SPOILER ALERT FOR ALL OF THIS FANFIC(I'm not to blame now you have been warned)
It was a warm summer night, nearly midnight in fact you could feel the warm breeze flowing through the wind. You knew you were nearly to the top, how many times had you walked up there, 3, 4 times maybe? You always liked to walk up here to escape from everyone in town. No one understood you, or why you are like you are. No one understood wha…
"aaaaahhhhh" *poof*
"oooowwww" you had fallen, just like all the stories you had fallen into Mt Ebott and no one knew you where you were.
realization started to pour into your body, you knew that you were stuck down with the monsters in the stories all the elders had told you,
"oh fuck, how the hell am i meant to get back up there." you said to yourself, you put your hand to make sure that your powers weren't overflowing like they had in the past.
"heh at least that's one thing that's going good for me" your powers hadn't shown for at least 5 weeks now, everyone on the surface hated you for what you could do, they never understood you, they were always afraid...
"Howdy who are you" a shrill voice seeming to come out of nowhere. You jumped at the sound of it and look to find the one that was talking
"Who are you. Is anyone there." it was at this moment you noticed your magic pouring out of your eye, you felt the burning sensation coming with it
"aaaahhhhh it hurts make it stop" screaming to anyone that could here or would even listen.
"Um are you ok, listen I'm Flowey, Flowey the flower." Flowey's voice was terrifying, instantly you knew he was someone not to be trusted. eventually you were able to get your powers back
"Hey your new to the UNDERGROUND, aren't ya. Golly you must be so confused" Flowey starting to ramble on about something but you weren't listening you just wanted to know how to get out so you could find the people you love.
"yeah, yeah, yeah, just shut the fuck up mate i don't have time for your bullshit!" Flowey was taken back by this. No one had ever talked to him like this, he knew that you were different and he loved it.
"Haha. Finally something different in this miserable timeline, it's gonna be fun taking you're soul"
"Wait what?" and in that moment everything turned black and white, even Flowey was.
"what the fuck is this, what are you if you don't tell me now... YOU'RE GONNA HAVE A BAD TIME" and in that moment a white flame appeared next to you and threw Flowey away. All color cameback to the world and you saw what seemed to be a goat human hybrid.
"Hello my child are you unharmed" a sweet motherly voice came from the hybrid
"my name is Toriel, I'm the caretaker of these ruins, i come down he daily to see if anyone has fallen. And you have been the first since..." she started to trail off untill you tried to get past her. she got a hold of you, she had an iron grip around your wrist.
"wait my child you can not leave there are traps up ahead that are to dangerous for a little kid"
"Let go of me. HEEEELLLLLPPPPPP!" you screamed in vain, but nobody came, you collapsed all of your emotions attacking you at once. You couldn't keep you tears hidden anymore
"Please my child I'm not here to hurt you, I'm here to help you stay safe" Her motherly voice convinced you to follow her until you found a way to escape
well that was my first chapter please review and leave some tips for me i am going to continue updating this whenever i can
Chapter posted on the 16/4/2016