I did actually send the review for Shadow's Hotel. I was called Random, and after some messages, here is a new story. Enjoy.
Dr. Robotnik: (the one before eggman) My creations are complete.
(thunder outside)
Maria: They're chests are so fluffy.
Dr. Robotnik: You just ruined it. Anyway, let's let them out.
(types something into the computer, Shadow and Shadows come out)
Dr. Robotnik: THEY'RE ALIVE!
Maria: Who do you think you are, Dr. Frankenstein?
Dr. Robotnik: Shut up. Now, what are your names?
Shadow: (very serious) I'm Shadow, Shadow the hedgehog.
Shadows: I'm Shadows, Shadows the AMAZING hedgehog. Shadow you STINK!
Shadow: Shut up. (hits Shadows)
Shadows: OW!
Dr. Robotnik: Stop it, now for an experiment. Take a chaos emerald each.
(Shadow took the red one, Shadows took the yellow one)
(if you don't know what Shadows look like, he look like Shadow but with gold stripes, not red)
(Shadow teleports using the chaos emerald)
Dr. Robotnik: Excellent.
(Shadows throws his at Shadow, it hits him in the head)
Shadow: OW!
Shadows: !
Dr. Robotnik: This may take a while.
Maria: I like them. Especially the cute red stripes one.
Shadows: WHAT!
Shadow: Gutted.
R & R. Please.