Hey guys. I know I haven't updated this in about a year, and that's because in this year I - and my writing - have matured a lot. And now I look back at this whole story and absolutely cringe. I see now how Mary Sue Phoenix is; in my other works, I've made sure to completely get rid of her perfectness. This one is what really matters though, and that's why it's currently in intense rewriting. I will keep this up for now, but I'll take it down in a few weeks as the new chapters are written. Those of you who are willing to stay with me through this I commend you and can't thank you enough. I love you all!
In other notes, I'm planning on trying to update at least once a week until school starts (which is coming way too soon). We'll see how much I keep to it this time, shall we?
Wish me luck readers, and I hope you're as excited to see the improvements as I am.
PhoenixMcGarrett (previously Skywalker)
The following chapters are the rewritten ones. Give me feedback; I really need to know.