YOU WILL BE MY REVENGE
I have been trying to write a fanfic story for Sasuke and Sakura however I was too lazy to do so or probably I just have this inferiority complex that I might just embarrass myself. But since I am doing nothing at the moment, I decided to go for it.
Anyway, this is my first story. I will appreciate constructive criticism. After all I am but just a novice. Please please be gentle with me.
Chapter 1
An eerie aura slithers throughout the area.
At the center of destruction, a man stood, emanating power and authority. Clad in black battle gear, he stands at the middle of this bloodbath ground. His aura bespeaks that of a harbinger of ill and tragedy. At a mere glimpse of his expression, one would recoil at the hatred he stimulates.
He is here to take his vengeance. To destroy every breathing life that bursts from this sordid place.
They took his most important treasure from him, the very essence of his life. Thus he will settle the score. And they will pay tenfold for the damage they gave him. The very moment they hurt her, they cursed the living daylights out of their deplorable existence.
They will pay. They will suffer a greater pain than death. This was his mantra while he was out in the battlefield. Fighting and destroying every living creature he passed through in this accursed land.
And so he did that. He unleashed a terrible destruction in this land.
He plundered everything on his path. Killed anyone that was on his way. Sliced everyone that his katana could reach. He showed no mercy, regardless of whether they were old or young, male or female. He doesn't need to spare them compassion. For him, everyone that thrived on this land was guilty. Their connection to this land held them to be blameworthy. Hence, his devastation of this land is a justifiable.
It didn't take long to accomplish his intention. Just for a few hours after he reached the village, the carnage that he let loosed was immediately done.
And now, everything is at the threshold of destruction.
The once lively land has now fallen due to his merciless plundering and aggressive marauding.
Many corpses lay on the ground, houses and other important edifices were burned, cadavers of animals litter the ground. The very place itself stench with death.
But for him, it is not enough. He still longs for more suffering and pain for this land and for anyone associated to it. Even after the demonic savage that he unleashed, his hunger for revenge was still unquenched. He can still feel the hammering lost of his once gaiety existence.
He knew that anger and revenge is consuming his very being but that is the only reason that he knew that he is still alive.
He condones this kind of atrocities: bloodshed, slaughter, and carnage. He never considered in partaking any of it. True, he is a warrior. War is something that he was used to. He participated in several battles but those that he killed were men that were armed for battle. Fights were men stand before a conflict of ideologies and try to uphold their belief through a combat of arms.
But after the lost of his wife, he was engulfed with too much fury that craves to be set free towards the perpetrators of his lost.
More, more, more. I want more bloodshed.
As if on cue, one of his soldiers approached him.
"My lord, we found this girl at the ruined temple."
He twitched at this information. Every life here was supposed to be annihilated by them. Why is there still a live being here? Even so, he faced his soldier and he saw the most enchanting and captivating woman he has ever set eyes upon, being dragged by two of his soldiers.
She was wearing the traditional priestess attire. It was so simple that in contrast to this plain attire, her beauty is even more exposed. Her hair is an exotic pink; skin as smooth and creamy as a pearl, and her eyes the color of magnificent emeralds that will invite one to look deeper as if there is a mystery awaiting to be unveiled. And these emerald green eyes were filled with tears that were falling which revealed fear and dread from him. As the girl shuddered in fear, he on the other hand found pleasure at her awful predicament.
"Are we to kill her, my lord?"
Kill her? He once again scrutinized the trembling girl. Then without any idea why he did it, he answered his subordinate, "No, I will deal with her myself. Tell the men that she is mine. She is my spoil in this war. I have a better purpose for her."
Her mind was reeling from fear and dread for what is about to happen to her. She is after all, powerless against them. No one will be able to help her from these pitiless men. They immediately annihilated her people. If they were not able to stood against these vicious creatures, what more can she do against them.
Having heard the deep voice of the powerful man in front of her, she felt anguish and horror. Clearly this man intends to destroy everything but unfortunately for her, she will be subjected to a fate worse than death. She will not be given an easier death from this cruel man's katana. But he has a more sinister plan for her that will break her and later destroy her hopes and very being.
Her contemplation was interrupted by the arrival of another man.
"I see what you mean by destruction. You took the very life of this land. You have destroyed it to the point of obliteration. No plants will ever grow here, no animals will ever graze here, and the people who once belong to this land will no longer have a generation to continue its legacy."
The man who appeared before them somehow has the same resemblance to her captor. Both these men have the same black hair, onyx eyes that radiates of authority and power; both of them have the same face akin to beautiful gods yet ironically, they also have the aura that foretells a bored contemplation of their surrounding but when riled can exude severe menace and utter cruelty.
"But what is this Sasuke, you left a souvenir? A delectable one at that."
"She is my spoil in this war. Hereafter, she is now my property. My slave. I have a purpose intended for her," her captor answered in a bored manner.
"But, little brother, if you will make her your toy to unleash your rage upon, I believe she will break easily. She appears so fragile and easily broken."
"Don't worry, I will go easy on her. There's nothing more fulfilling than to watch your enemy cringe slowly. The slower the pain is, the longer one would feel it, the better enjoyment for me."
Hearing this fearful exchange of words, which is to be her fate, Sakura panicked and decided to run from them.
She tried to entangle the two men's hold over her. Probably they were lenient enough for soldiers surround them. And if she would be able to get pass the men who held her, others will be able to capture her again.
It was worth a shot for her. And once she freed her entrapped hands. She made a run for it. She was running without a thought of were to go, only to get away from here.
Unfortunately her captor was too fast for her benefit. And thus, when she was only a few distance from his black clad captor, she felt his hand on her wrist gripping it to the extent of breaking it. The pain was too much that tears were once again falling from her eyes.
He roughly spun her to face him. He saw that her face was tear stricken and that she was utterly scared.
She was so scared that she asked her captor for some mercy.
"Please, sir. Please, your hurting me. Please stop."
Hearing her voice, Sasuke was enchanted by her melodic pitch. However, his heart is far too submerged in the darkness to spare the girl in front of him an ounce of pity.
"So you can speak. You want me to stop hurting you. But I don't think so," he snickered.
It was as if, the beast within him came out and that he was engulfed in too much hatred and anger that he just suddenly attacked the said female.
He caught her kimono and sadistically ripped it apart. Sakura was to shocked to understand what is happening until she just realized that her clothing was torn into several pieces and that she is naked in front of these men and is about to be violated. She cowered before them and continuously begged for mercy and asked help from any compassionate individual. She tried to cover her breasts with her hands but his captor will not let her.
Once he rid his captive of her clothing, the sight in front of him awed him. Clearly this girl is beyond beautiful. She is an enchantress. And her life is at the palm of his hands now. His to do whatever he wanted to do.
Despite the pleas of the girl, Sasuke was deaf to her protests and continued to ravage her. He ripped her garments and pulled her down to the ground and he set himself atop her. He straddled her, a knee on each side of her hips. He seized her wrists so as to stop her squirmish. His rock hard thighs pinned her completely as she twisted desperately, futilely.
In her naked glory, he parted her legs without any semblance of gentleness. His right hand captured her hands and placed them above her head so that it will not hinder him from desecrating her.
His soldiers around them were shouting lewd comments of encouragement to their virile lord. And his brother was watching his actions with a smirk on his face.
The girl beneath him was whimpering pleas of mercy but he will not give her. Mercy is a commodity that is to high a price for his liking.
"Beautiful. My brother is right, you are unmistakably delectable. Your luscious body will be worth my salt until the time I grew tired of you," Sasuke drawled in an unfathomable manner.
Sasuke noticed that her skin was even smoother than he imagined it to be. He run one hand atop her breast, full and lush. Her nipples, rosy in colors, which are tempting him to lick with his tongue. And then he was taking a nipple into his mouth. Her waist is narrow as contrast to her round hips.
He put his other hand in front of her entrance and unmercilessly thrust two of his fingers inside her nether region. At this sudden intrusion, Sakura shout from the pain.
"Hmmm. . . What luck I've got. I dare say, I must reward my men for finding you. You are not only delectable but you are also untouched. A virgin."
At this, the men's comments grew even louder upon hearing that their lord's prisoner is a virgin. One that will be made a conquest by their lord, brutally and sadistically.
While the men were shouting crude words of encouragement, Sakura continuously whimper and pleads for help and mercy.
Unfortunately, mercy is too flighty from her at the moment.
Sasuke was too viciously enchanted by the beauty beneath him that he immediately let the front of his hakama down releasing his engorged member.
And without any sign of quarter, he immediately thrust his member inside her, ripping and breaking her innocence.
Sakura gasped from the lightning lancing of pain. She could do nothing but to just shout at the brutal manner of invasion of her innocence. At this point, her floodgate of tears continuously flows. She turned her head aside and tried to close her eyes, wishing that everything were but a nightmare.
However, the pain is still present, a brutal reminder to her that this is indeed reality. Her heart was pounding furiously. He drove himself into her roughly, quickly, deeply. She could feel him, all the slickness and power. His rhythm was harsh, fast and deep, and he continued to increase his pace. And then he, he immediately seize his brutal assault of her.
"Now that was good, however I do not want to unleash my passion in front of my men," Sasuke commented while tapping her cheeks.
"Don't worry, my little flower the pain will subside and the next time that I take you, you will enjoy it. You will no longer shout out of pain but you will just moan for satisfaction. Don't let this event cloud your judgment towards me," he continued with an evil snicker.
As he stood up he realized that his captive's beauty was not only viewed by him exclusively. She lay spread not only before him but to all the men in the vicinity. And at her luscious sight, these drove the men to the edge and even him. He looked at his brother, and he could see admiration from his eyes. This did not bode well to him. Feeling somewhat territorial over his prize, he removed the outer layer of his kimono and covered the sobbing girl.
"Cover yourself with that," he commanded her.
Sakura helplessly reach out for the garment that was given to her. She tried to gather some dignity but she knew that she had already lost it. She was taken in the most vicious way possible. She wanted to stop looking so pitiful yet her tears continuously flow. As much as she wanted to stop cowering she can't help but be scared of what doom lays before her.
Covering herself, the kimono reached her knees. Regrettably for her, the clothing still emphasized every curve of her luscious body. She can see the sneer and lustful gazes of the soldiers towards her. She felt sick and filthy.
As she slowly wrapped herself with the clothing that his captor gave her, Sasuke noticed that she looked so fragile and helpless. At the same time he found this arousing. He realized that he wanted to touch this pitiful yet ravishing girl once again.
He will have her once again. And next time he will make sure that she will most certainly sate him.
She wanted to get out of here. She wanted to stay away from them. She wanted things to never have happened. Feeling the last of her hopes to be fleeting away. She gave in to the darkness.
Sasuke was about to grab her when she suddenly fainted. He immediately caught her and he carried her then.
"Well brother that was a nice show," his brother commented. "What are you going to do with her then? Will you leave her here to die? Or you will just give her to the soldiers for entertainment?"
"She stays with me. I'm not yet done with her. And when I do, the men can have her."
"I see. So you do not intend to keep her for a long time. Be careful though, her beauty outshines many female. I'm afraid she might ensnare you."
"That will never happen. She will be the one were my anger will be unleash. That is her only purpose for being alive until now."
"Very well then, I trust your judgment."
He walked away from his brother and move towards his horse. He lifted the unconscious girl into his horse and ordered his men.
"We will now move out. We will be able to reach our home by dawn tomorrow."
Please tell me what you think about it.