This is my first fanfic so don't expect it to be the best.
Please comment what you think, and if i should carry on with it or make it a one shot
"Frauline" said the captain, walking briskly towards the grand staircase of the villa.
"Captain?" Whispered a shy, soaking wet maria who was about to return to her temporary room and pack her few belongings, ready to return to the abbey as soon as possible.
"Frauline..." the captain had managed to mutter while holding back the sobs of the sweet emotions that came over him from hearing his seven devilish angels sing, but no other words left his mouth, he was just stood there looking up at her.
"Captain, i really must get to my room, i'm going to ruin this carpet if i stand here any longer" she said while skipping up the stairs to the staff area on the west side of the villa.
Georg realised merely seconds after, that she had retreated to her room. Not wasting another second he ran after her room and burst the door open. He soon realised the impropriety of what he had done, and shut the door before one of his employees had walked past and spread the scandalising gossip that Captain Von Trapp was stood in his children's Governess' boudoir. He failed to notice that frauline maria was stood in nothing but her slip. As he moved closer he said "frauline i ask you to stay". Maria still had a blank expression on her face, Georg ended his plea with "i want you to stay".
"Oh captain, i can't you dismissed me, merely an hour ago, and now you ask me to stay, MAKE UP YOUR MIND!" She said as she backed away from the captain, getting closer and closer to the wall beside her bed.
"Maria, i have, i want you to stay, please? If not for me then..." Leaned down to her hight and whispered in her ear seductively "for the children, and yourself". Maria was backed up against the wall, with the captain trapping her.
The captain raised his hand as he returned to his normal posture and cupped her chin, staring into her sea blue eyes.