~Hi guys! My name is Sami and this si my story "Immortal Envy"! I am so excited becase this is my first fan fiction! Its about Twilight and even better my favrite character Jacob! TEAM JACOB FOR EVER! LOL. Anyway I hope you will read and let me kno what you think! Constuctive critisim is welcome but no just hateful comments. Thanks! :)~
-Chapter 1-
Jacob sighed, gazing out of the window of his house. He was thinking about Bella aagin. He just couldnt get her out of his mind. She was everything that he wanted. But she was wtih Edward. He didnt think he was better than Edward as far as looks and personlity so he didnt think he would be able to get her from him. But then it hit him: he shoudl make her jealous! But first he had to find anoter girl. He decided he would look for one atg school the next day.
-The next day-
Jacob loked for the girl in the hallways before homerrom the next mroning. He got there early. H e saw lots of girls but none were good enough. He needed somone that was really hot but she would have to have a good personalitty to because he wasnt shallow. Then he saw her. She walked down the hallway towrds him, it was like she walking in slow motin. She was beutiful. She had long waist length fiary wavy red hair and she was eptite, and had flawless ivory skin and big round saphire blue eyes. She looked alot different from bella with her brown hair and brown eyes and dull pale skin. She was very pretty. But Jacob didnt know her name. He was gonna ask her but then the bell rang and he had to go ot class and she was gon.
-At luch later-
Jacob sat down at a table alone because he was kind fo a loner. He ate some carott sticks from his tray and sat with his head in his hands and looking around wandering about the girl he saw erlier. Then he saw her again, She was walkin across the lucnh room with her tray and still looked liek slow motion. Jacon couldnt help but stare at her because of her nice looks. Then she looked over and saw him looking at her and gave him a wierd look. He quickly loked back down at his traty. "What were you looking at?' He hdeard a voice in front of him questin. It was the girl. He looked up at her but didnyt say anything. She looked down at him her arms crossed in front of her. "I uh" he started "I thouht you were reallt pretty". The girls face smiled. "really?" she asked. "Yeh" he ansered. "Well my name is Samantha Everdeen" (~Refrence to the Hunger Games which I love, its such a good movie!~) she said "Whats your name," "Jacob" said Jacob. "Well nice to meet you Jacob." she said and smiled again and walked away. Jacob smiled to himself. He has found the girl.
~Sorry its kinda shrt. Willl do better later! Plese let me know whta you think!