This is my first attempt at a portal series...so yea. Review with how you truly felt. I may be faint of heart but my writing career depends on this so be brutal! Just not where I'll probably cry.
The characters:
Cave Johnson
Glados/Gladys
Caroline
Chell
Space/Neil
Adventure/Rick
Fact/Craig
Wheatley
Anger/Mike
Atlas/Anthony
Curiosity/Chelsea
Defective Turret/George
Intelligence/Berry
Mortality/Megan
P-Body/Penelope
Paranoia/Edward
Ego/Jonathan
Protocol/Dylan
Elite/Keith
Ambition/Rob
Introduction - Meet The Cores
"Cave Johnson here, students!", Mr. Johnson said through the speaker at the high school students seating along the bleachers. "Welcome and welcome back to another scientific year at Aperture High", Mr. Johnson greeted. Along said him was his Vice-principle Gladys Al and his secretary Caroline Quinn. "Here at Aperture High we accept the best and the useless and know that you all will be a huge impact on this darned planet".
Along the bleachers were triplets who stared at Mr. Johnson as he continued with his speech. The oldest was Chelsea. A curious girl with blond curls and blue eyes who smiled brightly at Mr. Johnson. The second was Edward. A frigidity kid with straight dirty blond hair that went to his shoulders and blue eyes who kept twirling his fingers as his eyes darted back and forth through everyone he saw. The third and youngest was Neil. The hyper who with blond curls and blue eyes who swayed a little in his seat smiling brightly as well.
Edward kept darting his eyes left and right, up and down until they landed on someone on the other side of the field. He had black hair that cover half of his right eye and purple eyes, probably contacts. But Edward knew better. 'He's in on the conspiracy', Edward thought staring at him. The boy looked over at Edward and smirked. 'I knew it!', Edward started shaking a little sinking down in his seat. The boy took a piece of paper and a marker and quickly wrote something on it. He held it up on his thighs and showed Edward and anyone else who could see it
I'M AN ONLY SIBLING, THAT MAKES ME BETTER THAN YOU!
Edward started shaking again. Yes, he was totally part of the conspiracy.
On the other side, Jonathan held his hand to his mouth to contain his laughter. This kid was easy to mess with.
"What's so funny", Jonathan looked to his left and smiled at Rob. Rob looked like his younger brother Rick. Brown hair, green eyes and a built body. Plus he liked to brag. A lot.
"The freshmen", Jonathan smirked. "Just showing them how much better I am compared to their little lives", Now if you thought Rob liked to brag you didn't know who Jonathan was. Jonathan has the biggest ego in the entire town of Aperture. He really loved to talk about how much better he is to everyone else. Especially around the people he dates. Which is why he hasn't dated anyone since ninth grade. And he's a twelfth grader.
"It's not my brother is it?", Rob asked raising a eyebrow. Jonathan snorted and turned away from Rob.
"Please. That guys to bothersome to mess with".
Rob watched Jonathan scribble something else on the board and held it up. Rob turned to in front of him and tried to figure out who Jonathan was writing these messages to.
MY EYES ARE RARE. YOURS ARE AN EVERYDAY. THAT MAKES ME BETTER THAN YOU!
Craig stared blankly at his brother, Dylan, from the other side of the field who was currently trying to pay attention to Mr. Johnson's speech. Dylan looked up at and singled for him to listen. Craig sighed before turning his head to his new 'friend' Rick who was currently flirting with the three girls sitting beside them. Berry, Megan and Penelope listened closely to his word so they wouldn't miss anything.
'Show off'. Craig thought as he looked around. He spotted his close friend Neil with his siblings a few seats below. A kid from his neighborhood who he believed to be a complete moron, Wheatley. Who mind you was a Jr. He saw Keith, a good friend, sitting next to his brother. Then he saw...Mike. Mike. The name alone made people bow.
Mike was a hot tempered, black eyed, red head who was bad business. He like no one and loved no body. And since he's an orphan, nobody cares about him. Mike wasn't sitting on the bleachers but he noticed Craig he started glaring at him. Craig noticed and turned his attention away from him. Better safe then sorry.
Mr. Johnson finished his speech with the exception of Gladys short speech. The students stood from their seats and headed for lunch.
Edward held on to Chelsea's arm tightly as they passed the students to the cafeteria. Edward looked around him until he spotted the boy from the bleachers talking with three other guys.
"That's him", Edward exclaimed stopping in his tracks.
"Who", Chelsea asked Edward as she and Neil stopped closer to their twin. Edward pointed towards Jonathan and started shaking.
"That guy. He was writing stuff on a paper. He's in on the conspiracy", Neil and Chelsea looked up at the Jonathan and looked at each other.
"Do you want to talk to him?", Neil asked. Edward jumped at that and started dragging his siblings away from there.
"No", Edward answered. "He'll kill us. He'll totally kill us. Just don't look at him", Chelsea and Neil looked at each other as Edward dragged them away. This was gonna be a long four years.
"My older brother is also the football captain", Rick smirked. "But since he's a senior he'll have to give up the title. Probably to me", He said a bit cockily. Craig sighed to himself and continued to totally ignore Rick. He didn't even know why this guy was talking to him. He was a total douche. "But, their are some pretty good guys out there", Finally. "Not like they can live up to beat me that is". Spoke. To. Fucking. Soon.
"Can you just stop talking for a minute?", Craig said irritably pushing glasses further up his nose.
"Why? Got a problem how I'm talking, pinkie?", Rick smiled.
"No I-...Did you just call me pinkie?", Craig asked turning to Rick.
"Yea. Your eyes are pink. Even if their just contacts".
"Never call me that again", Craig exclaimed walking off. Rick hurried up next to him and sung his arm over Craig's shoulder. Craig pushed him off and kept walking. "Someone's mad", Rick laughed. It was official. Craig hated Rick.
That my friend's is my introduction to the cores. Pretty sure I got them all. Plus it was short. Sorry. But like I saw, this story depends on your review you don't have to but, just let me know if I should continue it is all. Bye!
