Hi, everyone. It has recently come to my attention that there are authors who think my character Ananda Grant in Forbidden is a 'Mary Sue'. Instead of letting that get me down Ive decided to learn from it. So here is a wonderful little one-shot 'Mary Sue'. Its totally AU and for entertainment purposes only!! This by no means reflects how I will write my characters or my writing style. Think of this as an antidote for the 'Mary Sue Fever' thats plaging us all.
Mary Sue Riddle opened her glorius blue eyes and looked at the deep blue canopy above her and smiled to her self.
Being head girl has its perks!
She smirked and went about her morning rituals which included a shower in the lavishly decorated bathroom that she shared with the Head boy. Her very own twin brother Gary Stu. After her shower she stood infront of the floor length mirror and gazed at her reflection. Her long long long blond hair curling slightly at the tips reached to nearly her knees. The soft carmel high-lights stood out nicly with her naturally tan skin. Her athletic, yet curvy body turned many if not all young men on because they all wanted her. I mean, who wouldent? She was perfect... She is Mary Sue Riddle, the long lost half sister to Harry Potter and the daughter of Lord Voldermort!
Her very tall and super sexy twin brother, Gary Stu, entered the room and began to gel his glorious sandy blond hair. He got very tan over the summer playing quidditch and his muscular arms proved it. He smiled at his sister and the two left their shared bathroom and went to the Great Hall for breakfast.
All eyes were on the two as they took their seats at the Ravenclaw table. They were sorted into this house because they were uber smart. Mary Sue flicked her beautiful hair over her shoulder and looked up and saw that Ron was stairing transfixed in her direction, his mouth was hanging open and was dripping his oatmeal all over his self. She smiled and then noticed that all the boys were doing the same thing. She also saw that all the girls were gazing with little mooney eyes at Gary Stu.
After breakfast they had advanced potions and only 8 students were taking this class. Mary Sue and Gary Stu, of course they were top in EVERY class, even in ones that they wernt in. Other students were, Hermionie, who was jelous of the two because they were so smart, Blaise, some Hufflepuff kid, some Slyherine girl named Pansy, Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy.
Mary Sue sat at a table in front and pulled out her cauldren with a simple flick of her wand. Draco took the vacent seat beside her and smirked at her.
"Oh Draco. You know you totally want me. Im Mary Sue Riddle. Im perfect and everyone wants me!" she leaned forward and her chest strained aginst her white blouse. Her red lacy bra was clearly visable.
"Yes, I only want you! Your perfect!" His eyes were glued to her chest.
"But Drakey-poo! I thought you loved me only!" Pansy protested.
Mary Sue glared at the annoying pug-faced girl and turned her into a toad with a simple glance.
"Why Mary Sue! Thats advanced magic! Not even Dumbledore knows how to do that!" Snape proclaimed. "I have no business teaching you! You must teach us. Please oh please?"
"Well If you insist!" Mary Sue smiled and fluttered her eye lashes making all the boys, including Snape, swoon and faun over her.
Ok so there you have it. A total Mary Sue story. I hope you all enjoyed it!! Review if you want.