So this is my first Ninja Turtles fanfic, so I really need your opinion on this. Also my character's will be introduced. They are not normal but they been experimented by aliens. They were given new powers and they were saved by the turtles. So much for Spoilers!
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Chapter 1: Introduction
Cornelia's POV
It was 6:00 in the evening. Well, almost evening. I am walking in the streets of New York City. Actually, I am here for the summer with my three bestfriends. We just lived in a simple apartment at downtown. Gladly, my karate practice was done. Then my phone vibrates. It was a text message from Mich, my best friend.
Hey were here at the apartment already. Beth already bought dinner. So better hurry up before Haley eats the whole thing.
I took a bus and headed straight to the apartment. Elizabeth, who is known as Beth is one of my bestfriends. She has a medium length brown hair. She is 15 years old. She has a tan skin and an ocean blue eyes. She mostly bought some jokes but she is sometimes clumsy. But she has a soft spot for us whenever we need her help. Also, she is afraid of me even though most of my classmates called me a "sweetheart". She resides in New Jersey with her family. She has two younger brothers who are twins.
Next is Michelle, or Mich and she is one of my bestfriends too. She has the same age as Beth and Haley, but she is the oldest. She has a medium strawberry blond hair. She has an olive skin and green eyes. But she is the sossy one. also, she doesn't want to get dirty and she hates when someone judge her easily. So I just go with the flow. She resides in Virginia with her mom and dad. She has no siblings and she is pretty much treats us like her own siblings. Her Dad is the CEO of one of the most advanced company in the world. She's the reason why are we here in New York.
The other one is Haley or Hayley. She is my best friend too. She is the smartest of all us and she has her own laboratory in her own room. She has a long black hair and she is practically shy in meeting new people. Her family is asian. She has brown eyes and olive skin. She resides in California but her hometown is in Philippines. She has two older brothers and one older sister. She maybe be smart and annoying sometimes but we still treat her as our bestfriend.
I arrived at our apartment. As I opened the door, my mouth were opened. The place was a mess. There were litters everywhere. Socks and clothes and even pizza boxes. I am living in a nightmare. They are so dead. Like D-E-A-D.
"Nice one Beth." Haley yelled , they danced around. "You're on fire!" Mich yelled and together they danced.
I am going to burst. "Ahhhh!" I screamed and they all looked at me. "Uh-Oh" Beth said.
"What the heck is going on?!" I asked them. "We were just- you know having fun?" Haley said. They all know that I am really scary when I am mad.
"I don't care of excuses. Clean this or you'll die!" I threatened. Then they all started cleaning. I went to the kitchen for some juice. At least it relieved me.
"Ahh!" Beth screamed, in terror. I went to the living room and saw them in the floor. Then a dart hit me in the neck. I felt dizzy. Then I was down.
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