New Arrival
This is a rewrite I hope it shows some significant improvement from the other one.
Summary: There were others involved, but I'll never forget that man who killed my mother, father and brothers, I'll never forget those eyes…
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of its characters; I do own a few OCs however Such as Ayame and a few others who will be mentioned in the chapters they appear in.
Warning: Language, Violence (probably), Rape, attempted rape and sex.
It was early morning; a misty fog dampened everything around the area, darker than usual with the sun being blocked out by the dark greying clouds in the sky. The sound of crockets was clear, and small gushes of the wind as the brushed through the trees. Everything peaceful and calm, much to the delight of the guards who had to do the early shift.
"Aside from the creepy fog things seem to be well huh Sajin?" The guard was carelessly relaxed, arms resting behind his head turning towards his partner, who in contrast had a firm grip on his weapon, eyes never moving from the it's loyal duty in scouting the area.
"Mmmhmm" the lazy guard only chuckled to himself and went back to his business until they both heard faint crunches on the ground. Both guards stood up alert, concentrating on the sound ahead of them. The sound got louder and out of the fog came a person.
"A civilian?" The more serious guard squinted his eyes, and noticed a sheath behind the person's back.
"No a ninja" with that knowledge both guards lifted their weapons up ready to fight. The person finally reached the gates and on a closer inspection it was a woman, she had long black hair, past her waist, a red traditional ninja outfit and greed eyes. Her face was calm, even with the two guards ready to fight and ask questions later, she only stood there holding a hand up in protest.
"Don't worry I'm not an enemy, as you can see I do not belong to any village and I hold no quarrels with this one, I only wish to see the Hokage." Both Guards looked at each other; one of them looked back at the Kunoichi with a frown.
"Wait here" The guard ran back inside the village. Leaving the two ninja alone. The guard watched his partner go back in and quickly turned back to look at the Kunoichi, noticing him staring she returned the look and gave a half hearted smile. The guard returned it with a puzzled frown. The atmosphere was tense a small trickle of sweat developed on the guards brow. The Kunoichi raised a brow.
"First time on guard duty right?" Before he could answer his partner came back, calmer than when he left. He blocked his friend in a sign for m=him to lower his weapon.
"This way." She followed the man through the gates, taking in her surroundings, calmly sighing.
"So this is Konoha."